I Went To Heaven

I Have A God

Woken up by a mellifluous music never heard before,
Made me wonder, was I in the kingdom of Orpheus ?
Or was it the orchestra of heavenly maidens?
I open'd my eyes after honey'd slumber,
Blind'd by sparkling silver and blazing gold 
Of a goldsmiths treasure trove.
I walk'd step by step on the cloudy floor
Feeling the weightlessness of my heavy shoulders.
Much had I been overwrought  by mortal burden,
And heaved a sigh at this fanciful world.
Above the lands, above the seas, 
Above the mountains  had I obliviously reached.
In the realms of dreams I smiled,
And swirled my glittery gown.
The gods had been kind for this Elysian ecstasy
Loud shout'd I my gratitude to the Almighty,
If this be divinity I ask for no more
Before me stood my creator in all his luminosity and spoke,
You call'd me child and I your servant be, 
No more pain, no more misery, 
No more desire, no more passion shall ever feel.
Your soul in my palm will be, your vesture rested on the ground.
Down look you on earth,the towering inferno has turned you to smithereens.
Your love is here,
And here begin we a life afresh.
He point'd his big finger down, once again.
There on earth your treasures lie,
The fray is on and many will die.
For centuries have they fought and for centuries will they continue,
Your abode be here for all times to come,
Fret not you, for I be here.
Spoke I to God,
A dream this were not, for I am sure. 
What treasures do I yearn? What passions do I crave?
What pain? What misery you speak of when I your only audience be?
My raptures  the world knows not of,
For too entangled is the diseased world,
Of  attachments and detachments.
Much to their envy am I filled with pride,
My journey has not ended, 
With you by my side it has just newly begun.


SECOND
Balveen Cheema
November 26, 2015
Contest: I went To Heaven
Sponsor:Laura Urbaniak
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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December 2, 2015 at 11:53 PM
Balveen, Congratulations on your wonderful win. LUV **SKAT**
Cheema Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 6:22 AM
Thanks Skat!
A. Sharma Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 10:38 PM
Wonderful write Balveen ! Congrats on superb win!!
Cheema Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 6:23 AM
Thanks Upma!
Haight Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 3:46 PM
So beautiful, Balveen. Congratulations on your nice win. 7, Hugs, Sandra
Cheema Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 7:03 PM
Thanks Sandra dear!
Negron Flores Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 12:39 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Balveen.
Scars Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 9:19 AM
Thank you for being a part of my contest and contracts your win!-lu *smiles*
Cheema Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 7:05 PM
Thanks Laura! Travelling through clouds to paradise has its own joy!
Johnson Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 11:27 AM
Hi Balveen. congrads on your win. How amazing it is to me that one of the things that stands out to me in your poem is this: "The relationship that you are developing with God here on this earth continues in heaven when you arrive". It's all so personal! God loves u. Curtis
Cheema Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 12:11 PM
It is not by chance you wrote me. I was very saddened when you wrote 'God loves u'. Thanks Curtis!
Cheema Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 11:50 AM
Can't believe someone can do so much of indepth study of my poem. I'm honoured and overwhelmed, Curtis! Regards
Y. Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 4:56 PM
WoW! Balveen, I'm happy to see you on the winner's list. This piece is well deserving of the 1st place spot. Congratulations on your fantastic win:-) Alexis 7
Cheema Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 2:17 AM
Thanks sharing my happiness, Alexis!
Cheema Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 10:25 AM
Thanks Richard, for thinking so! Regards
Lamoureux Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 9:32 AM
A well deserved first place. Exceptional!
A. Sharma Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 12:41 AM
Superb write n a wonderful win Balveen! Congrats on first place win!
Cheema Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 4:26 AM
Thanks Upma!
Cheema Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 7:25 PM
I am more than than thrilled for this Honour! Though difficult to believe it was based on a dream I had a year ago, which almost turned into a reality a few months later-but someone I loved more than my heart died. This is my real achievement, Laura!
Leiser Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 5:22 PM
Thank you for entering my contest, Balveen! I was extremely moved by your poem, thus, a top billing :)
A. Sharma Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 10:45 PM
Wonderful deep write dear Balveen, keep your words flowing my dear!
Cheema Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 2:40 AM
Thanks for your ever ready appreciation, Upma!
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