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I Was So Wrong

I was so wrong Every time every time Baby I made you cry Every time every time My friends, My world My likes,My passion Where I had time for you girl I forgot you Every time Every time I let you feel alone All the time All the time I was so wrong….. My wish,My dreams was your only focus Did you ever think for yourself? You swallowed the pain Every time Every time You still kept smiling All the time All the time I was so wrong…. Your sacrifices Now I understand Begging you give me one last chance Baby I regret I was so mad promise you happiness All your life All your life I was so wrong…..

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Paul Callus

Date: 12/14/2017 5:09:00 PM

This is heartfelt and it sounds very sincere, Anand. The repetition gives it added power and helps to deliver the message that you want her to hear. Hindsight gives us a chance to dwell on mistakes and provides us with remedial choices. Regards // paul

Anand Parmale
Date: 12/14/2017 9:11:00 PM

Thank you for the pleasure of your visit and comment,Paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2017 3:11:00 PM

this is really nice, begging for forgiveness. It reminds me of one of Bruno Mar's songs. Great poem, Anand

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/10/2016 12:03:00 AM

Not a bad lyric, Anand. Sounds like you got a good girl that is understanding and willing to forgive. Nicely penned.

Anand Parmale
Date: 4/10/2016 2:01:00 AM

Thanks Timothy for uplifting comments....

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 4/3/2016 11:28:00 AM

A perfect lyric to tell a story of such lethal remorse. As I read this, the song "Forgive Me" by Evanescence suddenly played inside my head. :) What's important is that you admit your mistakes and ask for forgiveness. That's the essence of love. <3 -Hans

Anand Parmale
Date: 4/3/2016 11:51:00 AM

Hey thanks Hans for your visit...I agree with your comments....