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I Was So Wrong

I was so wrong
Every time every time
Baby I  made you cry 
Every time every time

My  friends, My world
My likes,My passion
Where I had time for you girl
I forgot you
Every time Every time
I let you feel alone
All the time All the time
I was so wrong…..

 My wish,My dreams
was  your   only focus
Did you ever think for yourself?
You swallowed the pain
Every time Every time
You still kept  smiling
All the time All the time
I was so wrong….

Your sacrifices Now I understand
Begging  you give me one last chance
Baby I regret
I was so mad
promise  you happiness
All your life All your life
I was so wrong…..

Copyright © Anand Parmale | Year Posted 2016

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Paul Callus Date: 12/14/2017 5:09:00 PM This is heartfelt and it sounds very sincere, Anand. The repetition gives it added power and helps to deliver the message that you want her to hear. Hindsight gives us a chance to dwell on mistakes and provides us with remedial choices. Regards // paul Login to Reply Anand Parmale Date: 12/14/2017 9:11:00 PM Thank you for the pleasure of your visit and comment,Paul

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/6/2017 3:11:00 PM this is really nice, begging for forgiveness. It reminds me of one of Bruno Mar's songs. Great poem, Anand Login to Reply

Timothy Hicks Date: 4/10/2016 12:03:00 AM Not a bad lyric, Anand. Sounds like you got a good girl that is understanding and willing to forgive. Nicely penned. Login to Reply Anand Parmale Date: 4/10/2016 2:01:00 AM Thanks Timothy for uplifting comments....

Hansteven Selfa Date: 4/3/2016 11:28:00 AM A perfect lyric to tell a story of such lethal remorse. As I read this, the song "Forgive Me" by Evanescence suddenly played inside my head. :) What's important is that you admit your mistakes and ask for forgiveness. That's the essence of love. <3 -Hans Login to Reply Anand Parmale Date: 4/3/2016 11:51:00 AM Hey thanks Hans for your visit...I agree with your comments....

Pratidhwani Biswal Date: 3/30/2016 11:17:00 AM Nicely written... Well expressed... Login to Reply

Casarah Nance Date: 3/14/2016 7:47:00 PM Great lyrics, many will relate to this write. Login to Reply Anand Parmale Date: 3/14/2016 10:40:00 PM Casarah , I was eagerly waiting for your comment....You never disappoint me....Thank you for being such wonderful friend ....

Constance La France Date: 3/14/2016 5:17:00 PM Anand, a deep and sorrowful write, I feel the pain in your words, well done and welcome to poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the journey ~ Login to Reply Anand Parmale Date: 3/14/2016 10:37:00 PM Thank you very much my friend! I am happy to get such good comment from a great senior poet like you..