I Was So Wrong

I was so wrong
Every time every time
Baby I  made you cry 
Every time every time

My  friends, My world
My likes,My passion
Where I had time for you girl
I forgot you
Every time Every time
I let you feel alone
All the time All the time
I was so wrong…..

 My wish,My dreams
was  your   only focus
Did you ever think for yourself?
You swallowed the pain
Every time Every time
You still kept  smiling
All the time All the time
I was so wrong….

Your sacrifices Now I understand
Begging  you give me one last chance
Baby I regret
I was so mad
promise  you happiness
All your life All your life
I was so wrong…..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Callus Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 5:09 PM
This is heartfelt and it sounds very sincere, Anand. The repetition gives it added power and helps to deliver the message that you want her to hear. Hindsight gives us a chance to dwell on mistakes and provides us with remedial choices. Regards // paul
Parmale Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 9:11 PM
Thank you for the pleasure of your visit and comment,Paul
Dietrich Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 3:11 PM
this is really nice, begging for forgiveness. It reminds me of one of Bruno Mar's songs. Great poem, Anand
Hicks Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 12:03 AM
Not a bad lyric, Anand. Sounds like you got a good girl that is understanding and willing to forgive. Nicely penned.
Parmale Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 2:01 AM
Thanks Timothy for uplifting comments....
Selfa Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 11:28 AM
A perfect lyric to tell a story of such lethal remorse. As I read this, the song "Forgive Me" by Evanescence suddenly played inside my head. :) What's important is that you admit your mistakes and ask for forgiveness. That's the essence of love. <3 -Hans
Parmale Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 11:51 AM
Hey thanks Hans for your visit...I agree with your comments....
Biswal Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 11:17 AM
Nicely written... Well expressed...
Nance Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 7:47 PM
Great lyrics, many will relate to this write.
Parmale Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 10:40 PM
Casarah , I was eagerly waiting for your comment....You never disappoint me....Thank you for being such wonderful friend ....
La France Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 5:17 PM
Anand, a deep and sorrowful write, I feel the pain in your words, well done and welcome to poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the journey ~
Parmale Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 10:37 PM
Thank you very much my friend! I am happy to get such good comment from a great senior poet like you..
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