I Was On a Roll

I was on a roll Dunked into vegetable soup We passed peas, corn, and carrots Someone slathered butter on me. Uh-oh!

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Date: 2/24/2019 2:18:00 PM

So cute, I just had to "Fav".

Date: 2/24/2019 3:14:00 AM

'On a roll' haha, I didn't think you meant literally Caren, great write, I really enjoyed it. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/24/2019 9:29:00 AM

I knew the twist would be fun. It made my 11-year-old grandson smile.

Date: 2/24/2019 12:24:00 AM

Someone slathered butter on me!...then uh-oh!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/24/2019 9:29:00 AM

Hilarious right?

Date: 2/23/2019 11:09:00 PM

I think that you are 'on a roll' with your titles there, Caren! Nice one. ~ gw

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/24/2019 9:30:00 AM

What a sweet thing to say. Once upon a time I was pursuing a journalism degree.

Date: 2/23/2019 9:29:00 PM

Uh-oh!! :O I hope that's not on your new dress :D Good one Caron :)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/24/2019 9:30:00 AM

Thank you Swetha, but Caren is no longer. She has been chewed up and eaten along with a bunch of vegetable soup.