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I Was On a Roll

I was on a roll
Dunked into vegetable soup 
We passed peas, corn, and carrots
Someone slathered butter on me.
Uh-oh!

2nd grade3rd grade4thlight verse

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M. L. Kiser

February 24, 2019 at 2:18 PM

So cute, I just had to "Fav".

Ann Gilmour

February 24, 2019 at 3:14 AM

'On a roll' haha, I didn't think you meant literally Caren, great write, I really enjoyed it. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Caren Krutsinger

February 24, 2019 at 9:29 AM

I knew the twist would be fun. It made my 11-year-old grandson smile.

Mahtab Bangalee

February 24, 2019 at 12:24 AM

Someone slathered butter on me!...then uh-oh!

Caren Krutsinger

February 24, 2019 at 9:29 AM

Hilarious right?

Gershon Wolf

February 23, 2019 at 11:09 PM

I think that you are 'on a roll' with your titles there, Caren! Nice one. ~ gw

Caren Krutsinger

February 24, 2019 at 9:30 AM

What a sweet thing to say. Once upon a time I was pursuing a journalism degree.

Swetha Vangaveti

February 23, 2019 at 9:29 PM

Uh-oh!! :O I hope that's not on your new dress :D Good one Caron :)

Caren Krutsinger

February 24, 2019 at 9:30 AM

Thank you Swetha, but Caren is no longer. She has been chewed up and eaten along with a bunch of vegetable soup.

I Was On a Roll

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