I Was Like You I Can Relate

Kindness soaking through my veins.
In time, I thought it would be rearranged.

Trying to find the right words 
it is frightening. 
I really don't want 
to end up fighting. 

I try to see the best in life. 
When I try to help,
they put up a fight.

Frustration overwhelms me 
Why can't they see...
The problem is not just you or me.

What happened to you?
Why can't you trust?
Your parents hurt you,
but that's only the crust.

You must dig down 
find out what your feeling.
These issues inside,
I understand the screaming. 

Share with me, 
your problems and doubts.
I promise we'll try 
to work this one out.

As the feelings emerge, the burden is lifted.
They tell me I'm strong and somewhat gifted.
I tell them the reason I do not hate. 
I was like you, I can relate.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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October 13, 2014 at 9:45 PM
I really love the way you used rhyme in this poem. It's an absolutely beautiful poem!:)
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October 13, 2014 at 10:25 PM
Lexy..Thank you so very much! I'm so glad you enjoy poem. Take care. God Bless. -Jennifer M.
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