I Was Late Getting There

I was late getting there
and I missed the sunlight
that shone on the table where we met
you enjoyed its warmth on your face
and the glass of wine  glistened
that you held in your hand
the olive texture of your skin
the red dress you wore , the purple ring
the yellow ribbon in your hair
a coalition of color
radiated by the sun creating 
an aura around you

I was late getting there
and I missed the way you touched my face
as you looked at me intently
as if no one else existed
and you said let’s make these moments count
now tell me about your day
and I remembered how you made me feel
your laughter at my inane jokes
you  seemed so sincere

I was late getting there
and I saw you with another man
and the last words I heard you say
as I exited the other door was
let’s make these moments count 
now tell me about your day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mcdaid Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 6:57 PM
powerful piece of writing ralph deeply touching
Sergi Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 8:06 PM
Thank for your comment,Liam and don't be late.
Vaso Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 3:31 PM
Its Ok Ralph, you was late getting here!!!! LOL
Vaso Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 10:13 PM
Wow Amazing and romantic and powerful and sad, great poem!!!
Sergi Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 2:32 PM
Thank you Arthur: Forgive my belatedness.
Sergi Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 2:31 PM
Thank you for your comment, Arthurand forgive my belatedness.
Allison Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 2:30 PM
incredible imagery Ralph but such a sad ending. i love the repetition in the poem too. Hugs Jan xx
Sergi Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 4:55 PM
Thank you, Jan: As a young man i had lost loves and left loves as well but The spirit of being intimate will always linger with me.
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