I Was In You

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I had written this poem during my lunch hour, I was a carpenter at the time, but, the words just came into mind. This poem has been seen in several different scenarios or situations, and I'll leave it to you to know how you perceive it.

For me, I see it as; Spiritual.

I Was In You I saw you today; But as unseen I walked past you today But you never knew I was there. I knew you in your heart; But your heart didn't know mine I tried to talk to you But I was unheard. I woke up to find out, It was all a dream I was dreaming.

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