I Was Hoping You Would Say You Love Me Too

My eyes saw 
you
The image of 
you attracted 
my mind
And captured 
my heart
You give me 
goose bumps
As you make 
me smile
Just by 
passing by.

A thought of 
you
Late at night in 
bed
Awakes dead 
emotions
You make me 
want to call 
you in da middle 
of da night
Just to hang up 
after I hear you 
say "hello"
See your voice 
is my medicine
That heals me 
within
You make 
everything okay
You even take 
away my fear 
of heights
As iv now 
made a home in 
cloud 9

I thought you 
were feeling it 
too
So I said it
Mind you there 
was a crowd
And I 
confessed my 
deep feelings
And you were 
silent
Slowly u 
walked away
But I was just 
hoping you wud 
say 
You love me too

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Faraz Ajmal

Date: 3/6/2018 7:47:00 AM

It s so sad and full of emotions, a very beautiful write, sometime we love a person, think of him day and night, but still can t have him, neither you are the love to blame, nor does he but it s God who have written your ways as separate then how can you have him, so instead of crying over a same thing again and again, it s best to move on in your life as your past may be dead but future can be bright

Nompilo Lady Fair Cele
Date: 10/17/2020 6:29:00 AM

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