I Was Hoping You Would Say You Love Me Too

My eyes saw you The image of you attracted my mind And captured my heart You give me goose bumps As you make me smile Just by passing by. A thought of you Late at night in bed Awakes dead emotions You make me want to call you in da middle of da night Just to hang up after I hear you say "hello" See your voice is my medicine That heals me within You make everything okay You even take away my fear of heights As iv now made a home in cloud 9 I thought you were feeling it too So I said it Mind you there was a crowd And I confessed my deep feelings And you were silent Slowly u walked away But I was just hoping you wud say You love me too

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Faraz Ajmal

Date: 3/6/2018 7:47:00 AM

It s so sad and full of emotions, a very beautiful write, sometime we love a person, think of him day and night, but still can t have him, neither you are the love to blame, nor does he but it s God who have written your ways as separate then how can you have him, so instead of crying over a same thing again and again, it s best to move on in your life as your past may be dead but future can be bright

Nompilo Lady Fair Cele
Date: 10/17/2020 6:29:00 AM

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