I Was Challenged By a Silent One

I WAS CHALLENGED BY A SILENT ONE

When stirred radiant sapphire talisman spurts,

idyllic rhapsodic dulcet beats, hums

the pragmatic leaves lifeless fall

causing a plethora of chrysalis show

where a hub-hub evanescent felicity enthralls..
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__Olive Eloisa D. Guillermo__
4:22 pm, February 03, 2016

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Jai Bankson

Date: 3/14/2016 11:13:00 PM

I'm keeping it very simple...You RoCK,that was pimp

Len Gasun

Date: 3/7/2016 12:22:00 PM

Hello my dear Amiga! A splendid write my dear friend, though I'm late, I'll hug this many times and you!You're really amazing poet! Btw, do you remember the poem I asked you before, I asked my friend(male) with a beautiful voice to read it and put background music and he agreed. We'll do together, if we'll have time. Maybe after summer class. If we succeed, i'll inform you ok. Tom. i'll have trip tom. so I cant stay long. TYSSSM for stopping by. God bless! Hugs to U & all Kabayans! <3AmigaLG

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/8/2016 8:17:00 AM

yes my friend id love it too.. just soooo bisy nowadyas too... hugs!!!~Olive Epoisa

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/6/2016 11:22:00 AM

Hi Ollie Olive, you made me giggle with your reply. I to shall challenge you one day. Lollie Linda

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/5/2016 12:58:00 PM

Done amazingly my lovely friend. 7... Good Luck,bl

Brian Davey

Date: 2/5/2016 5:13:00 AM

yes it I amazing that you used all 10 of them correctly in such a short and wonderful piece

James Fraser

Date: 2/4/2016 1:56:00 PM

Ten words used wonderfully and indeed in such s short piece. Lovely challenge by 'Silent One' and so achieved by my little poetess ~~ hugs//James ~~xx~~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/3/2016 6:19:00 PM

always up for a challenge:) enjoyed your write Olive @-> LINDA <-@

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/5/2016 3:44:00 AM

hehehe, I sometimes bite challenges Lollie Linda.. =`) weeeee esp when at first glance I know I can make up something from it, just some time.. =`)