I Was a Soldier

I was a soldier of the past 
And I know im not the last
I signed up to serve my Queen
Far off lands I have seen

As that soldier I done my best
Losing friends laying them to rest
We fought for what was only right
Giving freedom to others at night

As bullets flew and bombs exploded
 My thoughts and mind just imploded
I could not say I wasn't scared
But my vision was not impaired

The smell of cordite all around
Waiting for the alarm to sound 
Then the order of stand fast
Hoping this attack would not last

They come at us with all they have
Rpgs and a Gustav 
We hold firm and do not falter
It's not our turn at the alter

Be brave young man I have to shout 
As the young man does scream out
I've been hit this is bad
I wish I was with my mum and dad

It's ok you will be fine
It's a promise that is mine
The bombardment ends and we look up
Let's sort this out my young pup

Gingerly we give first aid
That is why we get paid 
We stretcher him out to the heli pad
In a few days he's  with mum and dad

After a while I go to see
That young soldier who layed before me
He's up and about and full of cheer
Winks at me we go for a beer

For those guys that didn't survive 
We raise a glass cuddle and cry 
For all the new guys on your career
Wish you well I got your ear.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/16/2022 5:24:00 AM
Hi Gordon, I really enjoyed this poem. I am the editor for the Veteran the quarterly magazine of the Alicante Branch(Spain) of the Royal British Legion and I'd really like to use it in the March edition, would you be happy with that. Hamish
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Date: 7/22/2023 2:32:00 PM
Hi hamish did you use the poem in your magazine. If not no problem i was wondering if i could get a subscription to the magazine as i am a case worker for a veteran who also lives in spain but in lampolla
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Date: 6/9/2022 7:17:00 AM
Hamish I do apologise missed this message I have no problem with you using this poem in your RBL magazine and if possible, if you were to post it could I have a copy many thanks Gordon
Date: 5/23/2019 11:55:00 PM
Gordon, On the eve of Memorial Day here soon. Observed this day at my work. Your verse makes me think about things. -Richard
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Date: 5/28/2019 6:18:00 PM
Thankyou Richard I'm glad it resonated with you I hope your memorial day went well gods speed
Date: 9/4/2016 7:25:00 PM
Very well written 7 mate great words
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Date: 8/26/2016 1:46:00 AM
Outstanding its as you im almost with you in the thick of it .
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Date: 8/25/2016 1:49:00 PM
A good interpretation of what is happening to our service personnel a good tribute to our brave soldiers
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Date: 8/25/2016 1:43:00 PM
A poem from a man on the front line well brave and well said I like it
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