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11/5/2025 for Quatern - Old or New Poetry Contest sponsored by Joseph May

I Was a Rose

I was a tender, fragrant rose,
free and beautiful to the eye - 
and, likewise, pleasing to the nose. 
One February, I would die - 

massacred on Valentine's Day, 
I was a tender, fragrant rose. 
Why did we give our lives away - 
my sisters and I, tied with bows?

'Twas only fickle fate, that chose
a boy to love a pretty girl.
I was a tender, fragrant rose
who died just as I would unfurl - 

all for a love that also died, 
wilted, stole by a wind that blows - 
forgotten, after those two cried. 
I was a tender, fragrant rose.
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Miller Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 7:26 AM
Brilliant David, congratulations
Crandall Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 5:07 PM
Thanks, Terry!
May Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 4:07 AM
Very nicely penned David, Congrats on your win
Crandall Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 5:07 PM
Thanks, Joseph, I always enjoy your contests!
Somadas Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 9:18 PM
I was a tender, fragrant rose... It combines humor, pathos, and lyrical beauty.. Congrats on your win David..
Crandall Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 5:06 PM
Thanks, Jenish!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 5:07 PM
outstanding Quatern! best wishes with this contest entry.
Crandall Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 6:02 PM
Thanks, Sara!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 12:17 PM
I enjoyed reading your lovely/wonderful yet sad "I Was a Rose" write. "Good Luck" Hope You Have Autumn Blessings As You Write Away.............
Crandall Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 2:25 PM
Thanks, Paula!
James Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 9:04 AM
Roses were my Father's favourite and he grew many different varieties. I don't like cut flowers and prefer the flowers to stay naturally on the plant. Knowing my luck I will come back as a weed and promptly be discarded lol. Emilia : )
James Avatar
November 6, 2025 at 10:43 AM
aww thanks David. You have just made my day : )
Crandall Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 9:15 AM
I think it's more likely that you will come back as a beautiful rose - to be cherished!
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