I Was,

a desert, devoid of fruition 
barren, from years of neglect 
praying for rain.

Then you washed over me, and I bloomed 
Stifled and gasping for affection 
wanton for connection, but never satisfied 
drowning in desire.

You breathed into me, and I gasped devotion.
Lost, foraging for meaning, for purpose 
a foreigner to love's labors 
begging for solace.

Your star appeared, to nurture me home.
Now I am a mystery-even to myself 
an enigma-filled mirror, 
reflecting on who l was.
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April 3, 2025 at 2:52 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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