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I Wanted To Say But I Couldn'T

I Wanted to Say But I Couldn't I wanted to say ,but I couldn't Thou shouldest hast realized Why hast thou not Who both of us realized . I attempted to forget thee But thy face denied it Thou will forget no more because Lips and cheeks art sweet thy. I love thee and I know Thou love me too But why thy eyes so sad All these long night. -Deeps......

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Date: 11/30/2013 6:29:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Deepak ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/30/2013 1:26:00 AM
Hi, Deepak, I like your first poetic piece on the site , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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