Elizabeth Neal Poet Quatrain

I Want You To Know

You told me you were through
You told me you were done.
I thought that I knew you
It looks like you have won.

I don't know why
You do all the stuff you do.
You make me want to cry
When you tell me it's true.

You want me to leave
You think I should go.
But before I leave
I want you to know...

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Raul Moreno February 11, 2009 at 4:34 PM Nice work, I like quatrains...Raul

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire December 28, 2008 at 9:31 PM Elizabeth,This is such a great build up for what is to come YOU are a POETIC GENIOUS ALWAYS...HG

James Foulk November 19, 2008 at 2:21 PM love can be so cruel but yet so tender and warm, we never know how it will turn out, but there is always tomorrow and new love. this was a great write.