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I Want You To Know

You told me you were through You told me you were done. I thought that I knew you It looks like you have won. I don't know why You do all the stuff you do. You make me want to cry When you tell me it's true. You want me to leave You think I should go. But before I leave I want you to know...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 2/11/2009 4:34:00 PM
Nice work, I like quatrains...Raul
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Date: 12/28/2008 9:31:00 PM
Elizabeth,This is such a great build up for what is to come YOU are a POETIC GENIOUS ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 11/19/2008 2:21:00 PM
love can be so cruel but yet so tender and warm, we never know how it will turn out, but there is always tomorrow and new love. this was a great write.
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