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I Want You To Be Mine Forever

I want you to be mine forever...... When the sun shines in my life then I want you to be my light When the moon bring romantic nights then I want you to be my Juliet When the wind blow his whistle then I want you to be my dancer When the ocean calm and pleasant then I want you to be my love boat When the rain shower with lightening and thunder then I want you to be in my arms that surrounded When the heart thrust for love and pleasure then I want you to be in my soul When the dreams brings reality in life then I want you to be my lady for ever Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved @ 2015

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Date: 10/26/2015 8:54:00 AM
I enjoyed the read Ravi such lovely endearing lines =`)~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 10/26/2015 12:07:00 AM
A delightful poem to read Ravi, so sweet and romantic. LINDA
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 10/28/2015 12:25:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Really appreciated. Love, hugs and kisses xxxx
Date: 10/25/2015 6:36:00 PM
A very romantic and extreme excellent write...........A.M.
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 10/28/2015 12:25:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Really appreciated.
Date: 10/25/2015 10:16:00 AM
What a romantic piece! I love it
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 10/28/2015 12:25:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Really appreciated.
Date: 10/22/2015 12:23:00 AM
Ravi, this is wonderfully romantic! Any woman would love the sentiments you have so beautifully expressed in this piece! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 10/28/2015 12:26:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Really appreciated.
Date: 10/21/2015 9:14:00 PM
this is really nice, my friend. You have a romantic soul!
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 10/28/2015 12:26:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Really appreciated.
Date: 10/21/2015 9:26:00 AM
Such a romantic write this is, Ravi. hugs!
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 10/28/2015 12:27:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Really appreciated.
Date: 10/21/2015 2:58:00 AM
- I hope the sun and love will always shine on you :) - A beautiful poem, dear Ravi (7) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 10/21/2015 3:17:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dearest friend. Appreciated. Hugs and kisses, love ravi

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