I Want You To Be Mine Forever

I want you to be mine forever...... When the sun shines in my life then I want you to be my light When the moon bring romantic nights then I want you to be my Juliet When the wind blow his whistle then I want you to be my dancer When the ocean calm and pleasant then I want you to be my love boat When the rain shower with lightening and thunder then I want you to be in my arms that surrounded When the heart thrust for love and pleasure then I want you to be in my soul When the dreams brings reality in life then I want you to be my lady for ever Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved @ 2015
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Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 8:54 AM
I enjoyed the read Ravi such lovely endearing lines =`)~Olive Eloisa =`)
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October 26, 2015 at 12:07 AM
A delightful poem to read Ravi, so sweet and romantic. LINDA
Sathasivam Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 12:25 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Really appreciated. Love, hugs and kisses xxxx
Muideen Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 6:36 PM
A very romantic and extreme excellent write...........A.M.
Sathasivam Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 12:25 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Really appreciated.
Artis Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 10:16 AM
What a romantic piece! I love it
Sathasivam Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 12:25 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Really appreciated.
Sietesantos Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 12:23 AM
Ravi, this is wonderfully romantic! Any woman would love the sentiments you have so beautifully expressed in this piece! Warmest regards. Pandita
Sathasivam Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 12:26 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Really appreciated.
Dietrich Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 9:14 PM
this is really nice, my friend. You have a romantic soul!
Sathasivam Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 12:26 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Really appreciated.
Nunez Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 9:26 AM
Such a romantic write this is, Ravi. hugs!
Sathasivam Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 12:27 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Really appreciated.
Andresen Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 2:58 AM
- I hope the sun and love will always shine on you :) - A beautiful poem, dear Ravi (7) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sathasivam Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 3:17 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dearest friend. Appreciated. Hugs and kisses, love ravi
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