I Want You, Lol

Something about you's caught my eye
                                           ~ the rest of me's along for the ride


            
                     August 26, 2020
              Flirt With Me Poetry Contest
                   Sponsor: Bobby May
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Radhakrishna Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 10:25 AM
Great line Gershon! Congrats on your win!!
Wolf Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 5:15 PM
Thanks for noticing, Krish! Eyes without Spies, Gershon
Deepa Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 6:06 AM
Lovely line Gershon sir.. Enjoyed it..:-) Congratulations on your wonderful win. Keep inspiring:-)Take care.Warm regards ~Deepa
Balasubramanian Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 3:39 AM
Congratulations on your win with the this awesome monoku. Warm regards, Rama
Wolf Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 8:58 AM
Rama, appreciate your noticing this Monoku. Thank you so much, Gershon
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 2:58 AM
- Back with a congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Wolf Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 8:57 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise. Happiness and Hugs, Gershon
Roper Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 7:25 PM
Great Monoku, Gershon, congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve
Wolf Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 7:56 AM
Thanks for noticing my win in the contest, Eve. Happy Thursday! :) gw
Watt Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 4:32 PM
Good one. Now I'm singing Sinatra's "All Of Me"! Congrats on your win, GW ~ John
Wolf Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 7:55 AM
Ha, ha! Sinatra's 'All of Me' was lighter to lug around than my 'all of me.' Workin' on it, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 4:29 PM
LOL ~ excellent, Gershon. Congrats on your well deserved top win with the gem.
Wolf Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 7:54 AM
Thank you, Line! btw: This little 'gem' is all cubic zirconium under the outer layer of sapphire. lol. Thanks again and Happy Thursday! :) gw
May Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 4:24 PM
Congratulations G.W. on your placement, I knew you would win a contest someday, I just didn't think it would of been mine, lol Great Job GW
Wolf Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 7:53 AM
Well, you know, if you throw enough crap-ola up on the screen, something's bound to stick in the '1' slot sooner or later. lol. Thanks, Brother Bob. I think we all enjoyed this fun and funny contest. YOU DA MAN! :) gw
Andresen Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 10:13 AM
- :))) ... well done and good luck, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wolf Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 7:51 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise. Your wishes worked! Merci, Mademoiselle! :) gw
One Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 8:41 AM
Ha, good one... we are all a journey of some sort...
Wolf Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 7:51 AM
Ha, ha! My journey needs to lose some weight. Thanks, Silent! :) gw
Michael Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 8:37 AM
Nice...so carefree in love...
Wolf Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 7:50 AM
Thanks, Arturo... Carefree is my middle name now. :) gw
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