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I Want You, Lol

how come you didn't hear thud sound? - i dumped into pole staring you.

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Howard Kerr

Date: 8/29/2020 4:25:00 AM

Hello Rama, I wish to congratulate you on your placement with this interesting and imaginative work Howard

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 8/29/2020 6:41:00 AM

Thanks Howard. Appreciate your taking time out to congratulate me. Warm regards, Rama

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/27/2020 6:35:00 AM

GOOD one, Rama! CONGRATS on your win. Janice

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 8/27/2020 11:00:00 AM

Thanks Janice. Appreciate your taking time out to congratulate me. Warm regards, Rama

V. Deepa

Date: 8/27/2020 4:02:00 AM

Haha...humour filled line.. Enjoyed it..:-) Congratulations on your top win.:-) Take care.Warmest regards:-)

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 8/27/2020 10:59:00 AM

Thanks Deepa. Glad I could make you laugh. Appreciate your taking time out to congratulate me. Warm regards, Rama

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/27/2020 2:46:00 AM

- Back with a congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 8/27/2020 3:14:00 AM

Thanks Anne. Appreciate your taking time out to congratulate me. Warm regards, Rama

Carol Mitra

Date: 8/27/2020 12:07:00 AM

Nice Rama...Congrats on your win :)

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 8/27/2020 12:12:00 AM

Thanks Carol. Appreciate your taking time out to congratulate me. Warm regards, Rama

Hilo Poet

Date: 8/26/2020 11:59:00 PM

Humourous (owie) touch, Rama, my compliments on your 1st Place win, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 8/27/2020 12:11:00 AM

Thanks William. Look down at comments posted. This actually happened to Bobby. I never thought it could happen. Appreciate your taking time out to congratulate me. Warm regards, Rama

Eve Roper

Date: 8/26/2020 7:10:00 PM

Great Monoku, Rama, congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 8/26/2020 11:06:00 PM

Thanks Eve. Appreciate your taking time out to congratulate me. Warm regards, Rama

John Watt

Date: 8/26/2020 3:53:00 PM

Ouch! Probably didn't hear the thud because of staring at you... Fun to read - congrats on your win! ~ John

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 8/26/2020 11:10:00 PM

Fun line for a fun contest. Imagine what you wrote coming true. Two persons bumping on pole at the same time. Thanks for the congratulations. Appreciate your taking time out to congratulate me. Warm regards, Rama

Bobby May

Date: 8/26/2020 3:37:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement Rama, I actually have walked into a poll because I was looking at a pretty girl lol, great job my friend

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 8/26/2020 11:16:00 PM

And you are candid enough to admit that. Not many would do that. It reflects the greatness of your personality. Thanks for first placement. My first top win. Am so so so happy. Nice fun contest. Thoroughly enjoyed reading all entries. Warm regards, Rama

Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/26/2020 7:26:00 AM

All the best Rama. Thank you to notice my error. I have rectified Blessings.

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 8/26/2020 8:02:00 AM

Most welcome. Sometimes s small error leads to NA. All the best to you too.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/26/2020 1:14:00 AM

- A lovely line for the contest ... good luck, Rama :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 8/26/2020 1:27:00 AM

Thanks Anne, yours is superb. All the best to you too. Interesting contest. Nice fun. take care. Hugs. Rama