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I looked coyly - our gazes now holding steady with a smile. 26.08.2020

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Date: 8/27/2020 3:56:00 AM
Wow, simply cool .. Congratulations on your wonderful win Carol mam:-)Keep inspiring. Take care.Warm regards:-)
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V. Deepa
Date: 8/27/2020 6:40:00 AM
Oops ..Am soo sorry mam..Will edit right now..:-! I was right in the beginning ..later got confused by reading one of your muse:-) When I read the word coyly in this work..I should have clarified myself that you are a Poetess:-)
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Carol Mitra
Date: 8/27/2020 4:47:00 AM
Thanks....and I'm not sir but mam :) You too...Take care....much appreciated.
Date: 8/27/2020 2:45:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Carol Mitra
Date: 8/27/2020 3:14:00 AM
Thanks to you Anne-Lise :) much love.
Date: 8/27/2020 1:52:00 AM
Congratulations Carol. A sophisticated and very visual work. Well done. Howard
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Carol Mitra
Date: 8/27/2020 3:16:00 AM
Thank you Howard.....much appreciated.
Date: 8/26/2020 11:45:00 PM
A very delicate touch, Carol, my compliments on your 1st Place win, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William
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Carol Mitra
Date: 8/26/2020 11:49:00 PM
Thank you William....much appreciated.
Date: 8/26/2020 11:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with the this awesome monoku. Enjoyed reading it. Warm regards, Rama
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Carol Mitra
Date: 8/26/2020 11:06:00 PM
Thanks Rama.....much appreciated.
Date: 8/26/2020 7:08:00 PM
Great Monoku,Carol, congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve
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Carol Mitra
Date: 8/26/2020 7:26:00 PM
Thank you Eve....much appreciated.
Date: 8/26/2020 3:50:00 PM
Your coy look brings a smile, Carol. Congrats on your win! ~ John
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Carol Mitra
Date: 8/26/2020 5:50:00 PM
Thanks John....much appreciated.
Date: 8/26/2020 3:45:00 PM
Congrats on your top win Carol~
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Carol Mitra
Date: 8/26/2020 5:51:00 PM
Thank you.....much appreciated.
Date: 8/26/2020 3:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement Carol!
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Carol Mitra
Date: 8/26/2020 5:52:00 PM
Thank you Bobby :)
Date: 8/26/2020 12:46:00 AM
- We can win a lot with a smile, Carol :) - Lovely line :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Carol Mitra
Date: 8/26/2020 1:46:00 AM
Thanks a ton Anne-Lise....I have changed the title :)

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