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I Want You, Lol

I looked coyly - our gazes now holding steady 
with a smile.




26.08.2020

Copyright © Carol Mitra | Year Posted 2020

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August 27, 2020 at 3:56 AM

Wow, simply cool .. Congratulations on your wonderful win Carol mam:-)Keep inspiring. Take care.Warm regards:-)

August 27, 2020 at 6:40 AM

Oops ..Am soo sorry mam..Will edit right now..:-! I was right in the beginning ..later got confused by reading one of your muse:-) When I read the word coyly in this work..I should have clarified myself that you are a Poetess:-)

August 27, 2020 at 4:47 AM

Thanks....and I'm not sir but mam :) You too...Take care....much appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 27, 2020 at 2:45 AM

- Back with a congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise :)

August 27, 2020 at 3:14 AM

Thanks to you Anne-Lise :) much love.

August 27, 2020 at 1:52 AM

Congratulations Carol. A sophisticated and very visual work. Well done. Howard

August 27, 2020 at 3:16 AM

Thank you Howard.....much appreciated.

William Kelii Kekaula

August 26, 2020 at 11:45 PM

A very delicate touch, Carol, my compliments on your 1st Place win, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William

August 26, 2020 at 11:49 PM

Thank you William....much appreciated.

Rama Balasubramanian

August 26, 2020 at 11:02 PM

Congratulations on your win with the this awesome monoku. Enjoyed reading it. Warm regards, Rama

August 26, 2020 at 11:06 PM

Thanks Rama.....much appreciated.

August 26, 2020 at 7:08 PM

Great Monoku,Carol, congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve

August 26, 2020 at 7:26 PM

Thank you Eve....much appreciated.

August 26, 2020 at 3:50 PM

Your coy look brings a smile, Carol. Congrats on your win! ~ John

August 26, 2020 at 5:50 PM

Thanks John....much appreciated.

August 26, 2020 at 3:45 PM

Congrats on your top win Carol~

August 26, 2020 at 5:51 PM

Thank you.....much appreciated.

August 26, 2020 at 3:32 PM

Congratulations on your placement Carol!

August 26, 2020 at 5:52 PM

Thank you Bobby :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 26, 2020 at 12:46 AM

- We can win a lot with a smile, Carol :) - Lovely line :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

August 26, 2020 at 1:46 AM

Thanks a ton Anne-Lise....I have changed the title :)

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