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I Want You, Lol

I had to wink . . . because your beauty got caught in my eye!


Aug. 25, 2020 for Bobby May's "Flirt With Me" Poetry Contest

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Howard Kerr

Date: 9/7/2020 3:25:00 PM

First class entry, Andrea. Subtle humour and clever word play. Congrats Howard

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/31/2020 6:20:00 AM

lol, you're a master 0f pick-up lines, andie...sweet congrats for winning big!...huggs

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/28/2020 11:52:00 PM

In twelve words you have said so much! Well done my friend. Well done. Congrats!

V. Deepa

Date: 8/27/2020 3:23:00 AM

Aah..... beautiful line:-) Congratulations on your top win dear Andrea mam:-) Keep inspiring.Have a lovely day.:-)Much love..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/27/2020 2:43:00 AM

- Back with a congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Carol Mitra

Date: 8/27/2020 12:00:00 AM

Wow....I'll wink to that :) Congrats Andrea.

Hilo Poet

Date: 8/26/2020 11:38:00 PM

Lol, very clever, Andrea, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 8/26/2020 10:58:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Nicely done as usual.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/26/2020 7:04:00 PM

Awesome Monoku, Andrea, congratulations on your 1st place win, very well deserved. Hugs Eve

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/26/2020 5:11:00 PM

Back with a congratulatory wink! Nicely done!

John Watt

Date: 8/26/2020 3:41:00 PM

Nice flirtation, (wink wink) congrats on #1 win!

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/26/2020 3:40:00 PM

hate when that happens ~ lol Congrats on top win, Andrea.

Bobby May

Date: 8/26/2020 3:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement Andrea this was cute!

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/26/2020 6:20:00 AM

Winkers, my favorite kind of people. Well done!

Paul Callus

Date: 8/26/2020 12:22:00 AM

lol...winking back...pleased it was not just a blink:) Fabulous feminine flirts:) Regards // paul

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 8/25/2020 5:57:00 PM

.... Subtle sleaze is so underrated.! I try to write it sometimes. Good lure here!

John Watt

Date: 8/25/2020 5:55:00 PM

Really cute, Andrea. Hope you are a winner!

Michael Tor

Date: 8/25/2020 4:58:00 PM

Very sweet, Andrea.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/25/2020 4:30:00 PM

- wink, wink, wink ... :))) ... flirting wink can catch his attention :))) - Good luck in contest, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/25/2020 4:05:00 PM

Beautifully... teasing!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/25/2020 3:37:00 PM

Sending a wink back to you for your delightful monoku! Best wishes for the contest.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/25/2020 3:36:00 PM

If that doesn't work nothing will lol Good luck in the contest Andrea Tom

Jan Allison

Date: 8/25/2020 3:16:00 PM

ha ha ha love it Andrea:-) hugs jan xx

Ryan J. Mccabe

Date: 8/25/2020 2:48:00 PM

An excellent example of the hazards of passionate love: "Watch your eyes!"

Mike Bayles

Date: 8/25/2020 2:21:00 PM

Very flirtatious. A lot said in a few words.

I Want You, Lol

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