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I Want You, Lol

I had to wink . . . because your beauty got caught in my eye!


Aug. 25, 2020 for Bobby May's "Flirt With Me" Poetry Contest

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Howard Kerr

September 7, 2020 at 3:25 PM

First class entry, Andrea. Subtle humour and clever word play. Congrats Howard

Nette Onclaud

August 31, 2020 at 6:20 AM

lol, you're a master 0f pick-up lines, andie...sweet congrats for winning big!...huggs

Caren Krutsinger

August 28, 2020 at 11:52 PM

In twelve words you have said so much! Well done my friend. Well done. Congrats!

V. Deepa

August 27, 2020 at 3:23 AM

Aah..... beautiful line:-) Congratulations on your top win dear Andrea mam:-) Keep inspiring.Have a lovely day.:-)Much love..

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 27, 2020 at 2:43 AM

- Back with a congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Carol Mitra

August 27, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Wow....I'll wink to that :) Congrats Andrea.

William Kelii Kekaula

August 26, 2020 at 11:38 PM

Lol, very clever, Andrea, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William

Rama Balasubramanian

August 26, 2020 at 10:58 PM

Congratulations on your win. Nicely done as usual.

Eve Roper

August 26, 2020 at 7:04 PM

Awesome Monoku, Andrea, congratulations on your 1st place win, very well deserved. Hugs Eve

Sam Kauffman

August 26, 2020 at 5:11 PM

Back with a congratulatory wink! Nicely done!

John Watt

August 26, 2020 at 3:41 PM

Nice flirtation, (wink wink) congrats on #1 win!

Line Gauthier

August 26, 2020 at 3:40 PM

hate when that happens ~ lol Congrats on top win, Andrea.

Bobby May

August 26, 2020 at 3:29 PM

Congratulations on your placement Andrea this was cute!

Joseph P. DiMino

August 26, 2020 at 6:20 AM

Winkers, my favorite kind of people. Well done!

Paul Callus

August 26, 2020 at 12:22 AM

lol...winking back...pleased it was not just a blink:) Fabulous feminine flirts:) Regards // paul

Sigrid Ermine

August 25, 2020 at 5:57 PM

.... Subtle sleaze is so underrated.! I try to write it sometimes. Good lure here!

John Watt

August 25, 2020 at 5:55 PM

Really cute, Andrea. Hope you are a winner!

Michael Tor

August 25, 2020 at 4:58 PM

Very sweet, Andrea.

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 25, 2020 at 4:30 PM

- wink, wink, wink ... :))) ... flirting wink can catch his attention :))) - Good luck in contest, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

August 25, 2020 at 4:05 PM

Beautifully... teasing!

Sam Kauffman

August 25, 2020 at 3:37 PM

Sending a wink back to you for your delightful monoku! Best wishes for the contest.

Tom Cunningham

August 25, 2020 at 3:36 PM

If that doesn't work nothing will lol Good luck in the contest Andrea Tom

Jan Allison

August 25, 2020 at 3:16 PM

ha ha ha love it Andrea:-) hugs jan xx

Ryan J. Mccabe

August 25, 2020 at 2:48 PM

An excellent example of the hazards of passionate love: "Watch your eyes!"

Mike Bayles

August 25, 2020 at 2:21 PM

Very flirtatious. A lot said in a few words.

I Want You, Lol

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