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I Want You Lol

my eyes are filled with desire for you ~ I hope yours will respond, 'yes.' August 25, 2020 Flirting Monoku Contest Sponsor: Bobby May

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Paul Callus

Date: 8/27/2020 1:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your top placement, Jenna! Now your flirt line has gone public I expect lots of 'yeses' to come your way:) ~ Regards // paul

V. Deepa

Date: 8/27/2020 4:34:00 AM

Wow..delicate write:-) Congratulations on your top win Jenna mam:-) Keep inspiring.Take care.Warm regards~Deepa

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 8/27/2020 3:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with the this awesome monoku. Warm regards, Rama

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/27/2020 2:50:00 AM

- Congratulations on your sweet winning line, Jenna :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Hilo Poet

Date: 8/27/2020 12:28:00 AM

Words that relish the heart, Jenna, my compliments on your 1st Place win, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William

Jan Allison

Date: 8/26/2020 8:11:00 PM

Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 8/26/2020 7:16:00 PM

Great Monoku, Jenna , congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve

John Watt

Date: 8/26/2020 3:59:00 PM

Back with congrats for your win, my friend!

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/26/2020 6:31:00 PM

Thank you, John.

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/26/2020 3:51:00 PM

Very sweet, Jenna. That pickup line should work ~ Congrats on your top win.

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/26/2020 6:31:00 PM

Thanks a lot for liking it and the congrats, Line.

Bobby May

Date: 8/26/2020 3:45:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement Jenna!

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/26/2020 6:31:00 PM

Thanks for placing my poem, Bobby. It was a fun contest.

John Watt

Date: 8/25/2020 6:16:00 PM

The eyes have it, Jenna. Nice write.

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/26/2020 2:54:00 AM

Thank you very much, John.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/25/2020 4:19:00 PM

Eyes plus deaire= a win Panagiota xxx

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/25/2020 4:23:00 PM

Thanks so much for your thoughts, Pangie.

John Gondolf

Date: 8/25/2020 3:28:00 PM

I am guessing there are very few who have ever responded with "no" :) Best of luck in the contest, Jenna. Hugs, John

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/25/2020 4:23:00 PM

There were very few that my eyes desired. Thank you, John.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/25/2020 9:19:00 AM

What we always wish for even after we are married...

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/25/2020 4:22:00 PM

Oh so true. Thanks, Kim.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/25/2020 7:09:00 AM

Very flirtatious and who could refuse such a pretty face Jenna!!!:-) hugs jan xx

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/25/2020 8:38:00 AM

Someone nearsighted? lol Thanks, Jan.