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my eyes are filled with desire for you ~ I hope yours will respond, 'yes.' August 25, 2020 Flirting Monoku Contest Sponsor: Bobby May

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Date: 8/27/2020 1:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your top placement, Jenna! Now your flirt line has gone public I expect lots of 'yeses' to come your way:) ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 8/27/2020 4:34:00 AM
Wow..delicate write:-) Congratulations on your top win Jenna mam:-) Keep inspiring.Take care.Warm regards~Deepa
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Date: 8/27/2020 3:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with the this awesome monoku. Warm regards, Rama
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Date: 8/27/2020 2:50:00 AM
- Congratulations on your sweet winning line, Jenna :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/27/2020 12:28:00 AM
Words that relish the heart, Jenna, my compliments on your 1st Place win, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William
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Date: 8/26/2020 8:11:00 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/26/2020 7:16:00 PM
Great Monoku, Jenna , congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/26/2020 3:59:00 PM
Back with congrats for your win, my friend!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/26/2020 6:31:00 PM
Thank you, John.
Date: 8/26/2020 3:51:00 PM
Very sweet, Jenna. That pickup line should work ~ Congrats on your top win.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/26/2020 6:31:00 PM
Thanks a lot for liking it and the congrats, Line.
Date: 8/26/2020 3:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement Jenna!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/26/2020 6:31:00 PM
Thanks for placing my poem, Bobby. It was a fun contest.
Date: 8/25/2020 6:16:00 PM
The eyes have it, Jenna. Nice write.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/26/2020 2:54:00 AM
Thank you very much, John.
Date: 8/25/2020 4:19:00 PM
Eyes plus deaire= a win Panagiota xxx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/25/2020 4:23:00 PM
Thanks so much for your thoughts, Pangie.
Date: 8/25/2020 3:28:00 PM
I am guessing there are very few who have ever responded with "no" :) Best of luck in the contest, Jenna. Hugs, John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/25/2020 4:23:00 PM
There were very few that my eyes desired. Thank you, John.
Date: 8/25/2020 9:19:00 AM
What we always wish for even after we are married...
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/25/2020 4:22:00 PM
Oh so true. Thanks, Kim.
Date: 8/25/2020 7:09:00 AM
Very flirtatious and who could refuse such a pretty face Jenna!!!:-) hugs jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/25/2020 8:38:00 AM
Someone nearsighted? lol Thanks, Jan.

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