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I Want You Lol

my eyes are filled with desire for you ~ I hope yours will respond, 'yes.'




August 25, 2020
Flirting Monoku Contest
Sponsor: Bobby May

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Paul Callus

August 27, 2020 at 1:16 PM

Congratulations on your top placement, Jenna! Now your flirt line has gone public I expect lots of 'yeses' to come your way:) ~ Regards // paul

V. Deepa

August 27, 2020 at 4:34 AM

Wow..delicate write:-) Congratulations on your top win Jenna mam:-) Keep inspiring.Take care.Warm regards~Deepa

Rama Balasubramanian

August 27, 2020 at 3:30 AM

Congratulations on your win with the this awesome monoku. Warm regards, Rama

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 27, 2020 at 2:50 AM

- Congratulations on your sweet winning line, Jenna :) - // Anne-Lise :)

William Kelii Kekaula

August 27, 2020 at 12:28 AM

Words that relish the heart, Jenna, my compliments on your 1st Place win, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William

Jan Allison

August 26, 2020 at 8:11 PM

Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

August 26, 2020 at 7:16 PM

Great Monoku, Jenna , congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve

John Watt

August 26, 2020 at 3:59 PM

Back with congrats for your win, my friend!

Jenna Logan

August 26, 2020 at 6:31 PM

Thank you, John.

Line Gauthier

August 26, 2020 at 3:51 PM

Very sweet, Jenna. That pickup line should work ~ Congrats on your top win.

Jenna Logan

August 26, 2020 at 6:31 PM

Thanks a lot for liking it and the congrats, Line.

Bobby May

August 26, 2020 at 3:45 PM

Congratulations on your placement Jenna!

Jenna Logan

August 26, 2020 at 6:31 PM

Thanks for placing my poem, Bobby. It was a fun contest.

John Watt

August 25, 2020 at 6:16 PM

The eyes have it, Jenna. Nice write.

Jenna Logan

August 26, 2020 at 2:54 AM

Thank you very much, John.

Panagiota Romios

August 25, 2020 at 4:19 PM

Eyes plus deaire= a win Panagiota xxx

Jenna Logan

August 25, 2020 at 4:23 PM

Thanks so much for your thoughts, Pangie.

John Gondolf

August 25, 2020 at 3:28 PM

I am guessing there are very few who have ever responded with "no" :) Best of luck in the contest, Jenna. Hugs, John

Jenna Logan

August 25, 2020 at 4:23 PM

There were very few that my eyes desired. Thank you, John.

Kim Rodrigues

August 25, 2020 at 9:19 AM

What we always wish for even after we are married...

Jenna Logan

August 25, 2020 at 4:22 PM

Oh so true. Thanks, Kim.

Jan Allison

August 25, 2020 at 7:09 AM

Very flirtatious and who could refuse such a pretty face Jenna!!!:-) hugs jan xx

Jenna Logan

August 25, 2020 at 8:38 AM

Someone nearsighted? lol Thanks, Jan.

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