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I Want You

let kiss of your smile bloom blush of my heart ~ thrilling mystique of romance August 26, 2020 Placed 2nd: Flirt with me poetry contest Sponsor: Bobby May

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Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/2/2020 5:37:00 PM
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A smile can do wonders. Very creative write, Vijay! Congratulations on your win. Peace, Angie
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/31/2020 3:03:00 PM
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What a wonderful nickname for your sweetheart -- "bloom blush of my heart." A lovely monoku, Vijay. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/31/2020 3:53:00 PM
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Thank you my friend--much appreciate your kind remarks, Carolyn.
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V. Deepa
Date: 8/27/2020 6:12:00 AM
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Excellent line...read by thrilling heart's :-P Dear Vijay sir.. A big congratulations to you on your wonderful win:-) Keep inspiring.Take care.Warm regards:-)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/27/2020 9:29:00 AM
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Thank you Deepa--much appreciate.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/27/2020 3:01:00 AM
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- Back with a congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/27/2020 4:55:00 AM
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Thank you Anne-Lise.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/26/2020 8:18:00 PM
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And my heart is blushing, while I am smiling. :) This is so beautiful and romantic. Your thoughts always leave me in complete awe. :) Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/27/2020 4:55:00 AM
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Your smile is much appreciated--many thanks my friend.
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/26/2020 7:29:00 PM
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Great Monoku,Vijay , congratulations on your 2nd place win. Hugs Eve
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/27/2020 4:54:00 AM
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Thank you Eve.
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Bobby May
Date: 8/26/2020 3:52:00 PM
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Congratulations on your placement Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/27/2020 4:54:00 AM
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Thank you Bobby.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/26/2020 5:34:00 AM
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Oh, this is a GREAT one, Vijay! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/26/2020 9:51:00 AM
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So very kind of you--much appreciate--many thanks, Janice.
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Silent One
Date: 8/26/2020 5:05:00 AM
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Very sweet and romantic my friend... I bet you were a real charmer with the girls, before you got married..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/26/2020 9:51:00 AM
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Thank you my friend--much appreciate, SO.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/26/2020 4:49:00 AM
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- Sounds exciting and romantic, Vijay :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/26/2020 9:50:00 AM
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Thank you Anne-Lise--much appreciate.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/26/2020 4:40:00 AM
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There's no way she could refuse Vijay. Good luck Tom
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/26/2020 9:50:00 AM
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Thank you Tom--much appreciate.

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