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I Want You

let kiss of your smile bloom blush of my heart ~ thrilling mystique of romance

August 26, 2020
Placed 2nd: Flirt with me poetry contest
Sponsor: Bobby May

Copyright © Vijay Pandit | Year Posted 2020

i love youmonoku

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Angela Crabtree

October 2, 2020 at 5:37 PM

A smile can do wonders. Very creative write, Vijay! Congratulations on your win. Peace, Angie

Carolyn Devonshire

August 31, 2020 at 3:03 PM

What a wonderful nickname for your sweetheart -- "bloom blush of my heart." A lovely monoku, Vijay. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn

August 31, 2020 at 3:53 PM

Thank you my friend--much appreciate your kind remarks, Carolyn.

August 27, 2020 at 6:12 AM

Excellent line...read by thrilling heart's :-P Dear Vijay sir.. A big congratulations to you on your wonderful win:-) Keep inspiring.Take care.Warm regards:-)

August 27, 2020 at 9:29 AM

Thank you Deepa--much appreciate.

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 27, 2020 at 3:01 AM

- Back with a congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise :)

August 27, 2020 at 4:55 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise.

August 26, 2020 at 8:18 PM

And my heart is blushing, while I am smiling. :) This is so beautiful and romantic. Your thoughts always leave me in complete awe. :) Brandy

August 27, 2020 at 4:55 AM

Your smile is much appreciated--many thanks my friend.

August 26, 2020 at 7:29 PM

Great Monoku,Vijay , congratulations on your 2nd place win. Hugs Eve

August 27, 2020 at 4:54 AM

Thank you Eve.

August 26, 2020 at 3:52 PM

Congratulations on your placement Vijay!

August 27, 2020 at 4:54 AM

Thank you Bobby.

August 26, 2020 at 5:34 AM

Oh, this is a GREAT one, Vijay! Janice

August 26, 2020 at 9:51 AM

So very kind of you--much appreciate--many thanks, Janice.

August 26, 2020 at 5:05 AM

Very sweet and romantic my friend... I bet you were a real charmer with the girls, before you got married..

August 26, 2020 at 9:51 AM

Thank you my friend--much appreciate, SO.

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 26, 2020 at 4:49 AM

- Sounds exciting and romantic, Vijay :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

August 26, 2020 at 9:50 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise--much appreciate.

August 26, 2020 at 4:40 AM

There's no way she could refuse Vijay. Good luck Tom

August 26, 2020 at 9:50 AM

Thank you Tom--much appreciate.

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