Sajdah Al-Riyami Poet Rhyme

I Want To Be Just Like Yew

Strong
never wrong

Tough
when the going gets rough

Loony
when all is gloomy

Addicted to chips
bitter sweet lips

Brown
in a coloured town

Small
with a shorter distance to fall

Honest at times
& mostly at rhymes

You,person in the mirror,im looking to
I just want to be like you

(Thanks for all your thoughts on my "To all soupers:Warning!"Peice.Helped alot Xox)

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Abe Lopez July 11, 2009 at 12:18 PM This is a great way to look inner strengths ........very nice!

Shannon O'Leary July 6, 2009 at 7:32 PM I really like this poem!! It is very clever! It flows well! Great job! Thank you for commenting on my poem. I appreciate the feedback you offered!

Mary Duhart July 5, 2009 at 6:11 AM Just be yourself and you will be the best you can be. Love the write.

Nicole Sharon Brown July 4, 2009 at 4:31 PM cool write!

Rhia Madison Thomer July 3, 2009 at 3:24 PM haha i like this one its cute and fun. your welcome glad i could help!! much love madison <3

Jay Loveless July 2, 2009 at 4:18 PM Great Write Saj. 3 O Clock My Time In The AM Ill Try To Be On. Imma Be Goin To The Park Tomorrow Though Lol.

Sandra Hudson July 2, 2009 at 3:24 AM Looks like you have overcome your dilema, and with exuberance I might add! :))-AA

Diane Christian July 2, 2009 at 2:30 AM aww a great write, kind of like mirror image wonderful, thanks for your kind comments on my poetry, God bless you from diane