I Want To Be Just Like Yew

Strong
never wrong

Tough
when the going gets rough

Loony
when all is gloomy

Addicted to chips
bitter sweet lips

Brown
in a coloured town

Small
with a shorter distance to fall

Honest at times
& mostly at rhymes

You,person in the mirror,im looking to
I just want to be like you

(Thanks for all your thoughts on my "To all soupers:Warning!"Peice.Helped alot Xox)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 7/11/2009 12:18:00 PM
This is a great way to look inner strengths ........very nice!
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Date: 7/6/2009 7:32:00 PM
I really like this poem!! It is very clever! It flows well! Great job! Thank you for commenting on my poem. I appreciate the feedback you offered!
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Date: 7/5/2009 6:11:00 AM
Just be yourself and you will be the best you can be. Love the write.
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Date: 7/4/2009 4:31:00 PM
cool write!
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Date: 7/3/2009 3:24:00 PM
haha i like this one its cute and fun. your welcome glad i could help!! much love madison <3
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Date: 7/2/2009 4:18:00 PM
Great Write Saj. 3 O Clock My Time In The AM Ill Try To Be On. Imma Be Goin To The Park Tomorrow Though Lol.
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Date: 7/2/2009 3:24:00 AM
Looks like you have overcome your dilema, and with exuberance I might add! :))-AA
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Date: 7/2/2009 2:30:00 AM
aww a great write, kind of like mirror image wonderful, thanks for your kind comments on my poetry, God bless you from diane
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