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I Want To Be

I want to be more than your one night stand. Your late night booty call, or your catch me when you can. I want to be more than your dirty little secret, Give me your heart and I will promise to keep it I want to be more than your second choice I want your heart to melt at the sound of my voice I want to be more than just second best I want heal your wounds, and comfort your loneliness I want to be more than your little freak I want you for myself and I don’t want to compete I want to be more than your fantasy chaser I want my lips to be the only honey you savior I want to be more than the greatest sex you ever had I want to be your main chick, I want you to be my man I want to be more than friends with benefits I want to be the one that you share your life with

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Fisayo Aderounmu

Date: 4/28/2012 2:21:00 PM

What a sincere heart cry flowing through a luv pen into the river of poetrysoup? Kudos Chiamake and thanks for tasting my meat in the poetrysoup. Cheers.

James Peranteau

Date: 1/20/2012 8:28:00 PM

Though the "I wants" rule in your write here, your desire to please your man, though buried in this write, shines with a passion that many men long for! Awesome persuasion here dear poet ! moving on...much love, james

Michael Ellis

Date: 12/31/2011 1:24:00 AM

I had to stand by an open window with a cup of ice to get through this poem. Definitely a Heater. Aretha would be proud. Thank you for pouring out your soul. Have a great year.

Kingsley Awoh

Date: 12/29/2011 7:48:00 AM

good baity

Kingsley Awoh

Date: 12/29/2011 7:20:00 AM

good...pen...good Baity

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 12/17/2011 12:39:00 AM

Very well said! Excellent one! Always, Laura

Roman Chebukin

Date: 12/14/2011 2:39:00 AM

thats very sexy girl. i love it. lol. the best thing i like is how everything means so much to a girl. girls are usually scared to say it but you aint most girls im guessing. good job MA. keep it up.

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 12/9/2011 11:30:00 PM

* "PS. * THANK YOU * SWEET BEAUTIFUL CHIQUITA * YOUR LOVELY VISIT MADE MY HEART SMILE * SUCH WONDERFUL JOY TO VISITED BY SUCH GIFTED BEAUTY * SWEET DREAMS UNTO YOU * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 12/9/2011 11:14:00 PM

* "'I WANT TO BE THE ONE THAT YOU SHARE YOUR LIFE WITH' * I LUV THAT LAST LINE UNTO THIS SOMEWHAT CAPTIVATING & STIRRING VERSE * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL CHIQUITA * IF I MAY TAKE ITS BEAUTY A STEP FURTHER THEN * ETERNITY * WOULD DEFINITELY BE MY OWN HEARTS DESIRES * I ALREADY KNOW HOW AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL YOU ARE, YET * ONLY MORE SO EVERY TIME I VIEW YOUR HEARTS REFLECTIVE VERSE * BLESSED BE THEY WHOM ARE SOOO FORTUNED TO HOLD YOUR PRECIOUS LUV * HAPPY HOLIDAYS TO YOU * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/9/2011 11:01:00 PM

I think a lot of women want this, Chiquita. Love your avatar. it's so nice and bright. Yellow is one of my favorite colors.

M.I.A .

Date: 12/9/2011 9:57:00 PM

simply enjoyed reading your soul today Chiquita and may your passion flows always to reach your dreams. thanks for stopping by and your kind comment.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/9/2011 6:23:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Chiquita. Wishing you a beautiful weekend full of joy. Love, Carol

John Smith

Date: 12/8/2011 11:54:00 PM

Aha! She wants a ring on her finger and for him, a ring in his nose.