James Peranteau Poet Free verse

I Want To Be

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I want to be the horse who
      Jesus Christ rides 
               at His 
        second coming

        Carrying Christ
   from beginning to end

     Through the clouds
     to the mountain top

          I being first
       to hear the echo
     of His proclamations

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Kim Hilliker May 1, 2010 at 5:16 PM Great write. Thanks for sharing.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix April 29, 2010 at 9:07 PM Hmm :) I don't think a horse can fly, but I like the meaning and the heart you express towards Jesus. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.

Charmaine Chircop April 29, 2010 at 7:35 AM Great poem . .You want tn be the instrument in God's hands. .and you are. .and Andrea does great blogs. .Charma

Doris Culverhouse April 27, 2010 at 8:17 AM enjoyed nicely penned---

Dr.Ram Mehta April 27, 2010 at 6:21 AM I enjoyed the lyric

Poet Destroyer A April 27, 2010 at 4:59 AM good job as well Andrea is an inspiration,..p..d

Sara Kendrick April 27, 2010 at 4:29 AM Well this an interesting write..Thought provoking...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara