Robert Rekab Poet Verse

I Want That

the horror of this silence
these quite sounds that kill
empty spaces
Hated
echo's loud and still

Shouted eyes, those daggers
dripping loathsome drops
lips so tight,
it's hurting, 
pain that never stops.

can't we build a fire,
a warm and burning brace?
sit a little love down,
brighten up this place.

is there no forgiving?
grudges held with might.
strength in numbered sins 
now
every little slight

can there be a rewind?
a wrapping back of time
moments when we had love,
prickly though sublime.

I want that

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Rachel Aylott October 10, 2014 at 1:05 AM lovely poem

Skat A October 7, 2014 at 11:39 AM Robert, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT Robert Rekab October 9, 2014 at 7:50 AM Cheers to you, most excellent wordsmith.

Poet Destroyer A September 30, 2014 at 9:18 AM Robert,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen September 30, 2014 at 5:01 AM - Warm welcome to PoetrySoup Robert - I choose your first very well written verse - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Robert Rekab September 30, 2014 at 8:54 AM really appreciate you taking the time to say hello. thanks for the read