I Want My Face

I
can not
comprehend,
who is this girl?
Why is she looking
back at me? Why is she
here? She moves and sounds like me;
but this is not me. I want me
back. My face is the only thing that
can give me sanity and peaceful calm.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Merryman Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 1:43 PM
Brandee, congrats on your win with this thought provoking write. Love, KIm
Brown Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 7:15 AM
A belated congratulations on your well deserved placement in Brian's "Ten Lines" contest Brandee. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
April 8, 2012 at 12:46 AM
very good poem questioning self identity.Congrats on your win.
Falotico Avatar
November 26, 2011 at 10:24 AM
intersting piece you have penne here...enjoyed your search for your self..
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