Josh Torres Poet Free verse

I Want Her

I found her the,
Perfect simple girl,
not a cheer leader,
yet sporty,
your the right height,
everything i want,
but you belong to my friend,
your a girl that i cannot have,
i want you to be with me,
but your with him,
i know you dont like me
but i want you
so please girl give me just one chance

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Alley Poe April 10, 2009 at 10:33 AM You never know! Great Write

Emily Kroeger April 3, 2009 at 10:59 PM aww Josh who's the girl?? I sorry ={

Carolyn Devonshire April 2, 2009 at 5:23 PM Show her this wonderful poem, Josh. It may inspire her to give you that chance. I know I would!

Derrick Burton April 2, 2009 at 3:42 PM Sounds like its eating at you and you decided to write about it. I LOVE real people who write about real emotions and don't mind doing so. Enjoyed this write and have a blessed day.