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I Want Her

I found her the, Perfect simple girl, not a cheer leader, yet sporty, your the right height, everything i want, but you belong to my friend, your a girl that i cannot have, i want you to be with me, but your with him, i know you dont like me but i want you so please girl give me just one chance

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/10/2009 10:33:00 AM
You never know! Great Write
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Date: 4/3/2009 10:59:00 PM
aww Josh who's the girl?? I sorry ={
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Date: 4/2/2009 5:23:00 PM
Show her this wonderful poem, Josh. It may inspire her to give you that chance. I know I would!
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Date: 4/2/2009 3:42:00 PM
Sounds like its eating at you and you decided to write about it. I LOVE real people who write about real emotions and don't mind doing so. Enjoyed this write and have a blessed day.
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