I Wanna Be Creative

i want to be creative 
but sometime i am negative
damn someone turn me positive 
to make me feel am a good native

listen to me bb no one can be great
only if you now how to make the beat 
beat the best and u never take a set
cuz everyone well the bad freaky beast
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Agustin Avatar
November 6, 2024 at 7:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 7:30 AM
anasse kamal, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 1:15 PM
Anasse, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
Yuhas Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 5:47 PM
My first read of dramatic verse anasse, good one.
Mcdaid Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 2:44 PM
nicely penned piece
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