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I Walked With Death

She hoovers about For her soul pourpose she is As we must all walk by her For it is written And I took a walk with her My rhyme made her smile

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/13/2009 3:22:00 PM

great view the way you approach death--your rhyme made her smile--such radiant light flows through you and you make death smile and rise up---lol---charma:)

John Rhinem

Date: 6/10/2009 8:36:00 AM

Yes, I believe that Your rhyme would make her smile my dear brother Jeremiah~But then again, I already know whom You walk with Yourself~"The Great I Am!!":)~Smile, so of course, who would not feel or be touched by, the aura of Your beauty....Wonderful thought here my dear friend~And, "My Love Always To You & Your Loves, John!!:) Smile, I am certain You have another blessed write to view....

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 6/10/2009 8:17:00 AM

This is intense my friend and well written. :) You convey a very 'calm sense' addressing death.