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As an ambulance medic on call, I’m paged to a school bus accident. And I rush out to the location, personal emotions set aside. I found a scene of bloody carnage, small bodies, terribly disfigured. And I approached a badly burnt boy screaming in agony, who was dying. I knew that I couldn't save that boy and though it hurt, I had to leave him. For I was too busy with others, to give him any more of my time. Despite his torment, I left him there, for those who had a chance, needed me. And among the screams, I shut him out, determined to save other young lives. Then I felt a tap on my shoulder a police officer found my son. And led me to a sheeted stretcher, and the corpse of that burnt little boy. My heart shattered, I wanted to die, I hadn't even recognized him. And his death will forever haunt me for as he cried out, I walked away. (Blank Verse) July 1, 2018

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Date: 7/1/2018 9:00:00 AM
So so sad. It makes one not want to go on
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Date: 7/1/2018 10:07:00 AM
Thanks Tim, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/1/2018 8:48:00 AM
OMG, Emile. This scenario belongs in the annals of the worst nightmares ever !!! Beautifully penned.
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Date: 7/1/2018 10:07:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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