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I Walk On

Last hints of light lay down gasping in the night reaching for a touch a comfort loved so much I walk on where darkness plays her song fearing what went wrong too fast and way too strong No excuses no regrets one gives and then one gets no others laying claim in love there is no shame The light lays down and I walk on

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/22/2017 8:10:00 AM
What an ending to this one! Awesome :)
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Date: 7/22/2017 3:20:00 AM
Very beautiful .... walking on the light creates a shadow that hates darkness...
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Date: 7/21/2017 3:50:00 AM
the poem made me think of complete passion - and losing it - but the poem seemed like two poems put together?
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Date: 7/20/2017 5:56:00 PM
A beautiful poem, Tim. I loved "In love their is no shame".
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Date: 7/20/2017 4:06:00 PM
Heartily beautiful... hugs :)
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Date: 7/20/2017 2:32:00 PM
- "No excuses no regrets ... one gives and then one gets " ( !!! ) - Lovely written, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/19/2017 10:11:00 PM
Your verse is rocking on my friend...^WW^
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Date: 7/19/2017 6:11:00 PM
Deep and sane pen xomo
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Date: 7/19/2017 6:09:00 PM
Sooner or later the light will stay on, and then your walking will have reached a happy ending.
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Date: 7/19/2017 4:37:00 PM
Tim, you express what I miss. How I long for just one kiss. Here's hoping you have the happy ending you deserve.
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Date: 7/19/2017 4:32:00 PM
Always forward, never back. Seems a little melancholic, Tim. beautifully written as usual:)
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Date: 7/19/2017 4:27:00 PM
Beautiful but oh so emotional tim the penultimate stanza hits home hard:-( hugs Jan xx
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