I Wake To Sleep

Ducks in raincoats, dogs in hats,
sinking lifeboats filled with cats,
narrow bridges, no side-rails,
soaring heights, faces pale.

Giant ships in narrow locks,
back and forth the great ship rocks.
Turquoise oceans, snow-white beaches,
arms outstretched, a baby reaches.

To that old vineyard I go once more,
my feet are bare and I am poor.
Sometimes my dad is there with me,
a dreamer's dream reality.

My childhood home is still the same,
but no one's there 'cept me to blame.
My sleeping self roams free and far,
soaring like a shooting star.

Unchained by time or earthly flesh,
many worlds in one quick breath,
but, God forbid, I have to ride
that elevator without sides.

I cling to the floor on hands and knees,
it swings inside the shaft with ease.
Then I awake, I'm back on Earth,
and try to figure which is worse.

Time is such a great restriction,
sleeping is a real addiction.
I must admit, I wake to sleep,
it is my haven from defeat.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Lucas Avatar
November 15, 2008 at 11:01 AM
OH MY GOD!! I loved the rhythm of this poem. And the profound wisdom of the last rhymed couplet. Yeah baby, sleep is our heaven from defeat!! Wood
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
November 12, 2008 at 5:12 PM
If we focus on the things that are screwed up in our lives, it becomes a waiting game to see it all end. When we focus only on the things that are going right, accepting the negative things as a strength builder, the challenges become easier to overcome. My grandson asked me what my best days were in my life. I told him I hadn't seen them yet, just enjoying each new day as it comes. Vince
Torres Avatar
November 11, 2008 at 8:14 AM
Danielle this is chilling wow. Im scared of heights you had me going . Excellent write. Please comment on a couple of mine would love to have your insight. Michael Torres
Richards Avatar
November 11, 2008 at 7:44 AM
Dreams are such a facinating escape, I often wake trying to analyze what they might mean. The strange things that occur, can often be a mystery, and quite often I want them to continue, but they don't. It's like a movie that you didn't get to see the ending! ~ What an interesting poem here, very well done! ~ Carrie
Cooper Avatar
November 11, 2008 at 6:47 AM
great pen and thank you for sharing
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