Notes About The Poem
pictured of JAMES EDWARD LEE SR.
...a summer in 2023
I view Father's view you see me I see you-
I view Father's view
you see me I see you
the view outside
his clouded eyes
back drop summer green leaves
the clothes he wears
straw-hat brim
around bill shadow
I view Father's view
you see me I see you
demeaner still
checkered blue dark and light
white squares
happy to face
embraced-breathing God's grace
embraced-eyes covering dark shades
glasses
I look summer new heated day
I view Father's view
you see me I see you
the view outside
his clouded eyes
back drop summer green leaves
the clothes he wears
straw-hat brim
around bill shadow
I view Father's view
you see me I see you
demeaner still
checkered blue dark and light
white squares
I look a shroud
I view Father's view
you see me I see you
I view Father's view
you see me I see you
2/7/24
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr. 2024©
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