I Unchained My Heart

Rainy days gone and summer too Since long my heart was kept In chain on eiderdown bed Feared of getting wet or sunburn. I let it fly now. Like a parrot uncaged I eject my heart. This autumn,I unchained my heart. Embellished with the colors of Blue sky and white clouds ; Embossed with the petals of Sunflowers and Marigolds ; Painted with the colors of Green leaves, Like an Elf, my heart, I let it fly now. I free my heart. This autumn,I unchained my heart. Fly with the fluffy clouds Like a moon, smile gailey. Suffocated you were Freely now roam the valley, Foreshadowing tomorrow’s uncertainties, Warning of tomorrow’s complexities And bring forth to me The stories of far-off folks, The melodies of joys and griefs, And tell this autumn To stay for a while To walk with me For some unknown mile. This autumn, I unchained my chained heart. For till another season. I unchained my heart.
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Date: 11/7/2013 7:05:00 PM
Simply beautiful... So glad you commented on mine so I was able to discover yours. Hugs
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 11/27/2013 1:40:00 AM
thanks for liking it!!
Date: 10/24/2013 3:05:00 PM
beautiful
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Date: 11/27/2013 1:40:00 AM
thanks!
Date: 10/24/2013 1:50:00 AM
Lovely rhyme and rhythm you catch, Kiran
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Date: 11/27/2013 1:40:00 AM
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 11/27/2013 1:40:00 AM
thanks Dr. Ram!
Date: 10/23/2013 7:26:00 PM
Lovely verse with beautiful flow. Like the message too. Great job! Always, Laura
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Date: 10/23/2013 9:11:00 PM
thanx 4 reading Laura.
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