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I Try To Keep

I walked along the old railroad tracks Surrounded by yellow hues all around Birds chattered happily in the bushes Lifting my spirit with their sound The birch trees shined, even with gray sky As I wondered where you are My thoughts adrift a morning breeze That came to me, from oh so far Autumn is moving quickly now Making way for winter’s return I’m bracing for the cold to arrive While trying to keep, each lesson I learn Heidi Sands 10/12/19

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Chris Green

Date: 10/14/2019 7:29:00 AM

Winter I am sure is quickly approaching in your area my friend. keep thinking positive things and maybe it won't feel so cold when it does arrive. :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/14/2019 8:07:00 AM

Yes, it is starting to get colder and raw outside. Yesterday was a bit warmer. Today may be, when the sun gets shining more. I hope I can keep thinking those positive thoughts to battle the bitter cold on the way. Thank you. Have a great day Chris :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 10/13/2019 7:48:00 AM

The lesson you may keep but not the winter in your bones...Nice write my friend

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/13/2019 8:01:00 AM

Thank you so much Arturo. I appreciate you reading my poetry and all your support :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/12/2019 10:22:00 AM

you set this scene up nicely...i followed through your footsteps, seeing what you were seeing...beautifully expressed Heidi :) hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/12/2019 10:51:00 AM

I am happy to hear that Sandra. Thank you for your visit and kind comment. Have a nice day :)

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 10/12/2019 9:40:00 AM

I was right there with you walking those tracks....my thoughts adrift a morning breeze. Wonderful imagery.

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/12/2019 10:09:00 AM

Great to hear that Jeanne. Thank you for your kind comment. Have a nice day :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/12/2019 8:40:00 AM

Beautiful sights and sound of nature on this charming walk...uplifting!

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/12/2019 8:41:00 AM

Thank you very much Vijay. I love to hear that this is uplifting to read :)