Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

I Try To Keep

I walked along the old railroad tracks
Surrounded by yellow hues all around
Birds chattered happily in the bushes
Lifting my spirit with their sound
The birch trees shined, even with gray sky
As I wondered where you are
My thoughts adrift a morning breeze
That came to me, from oh so far
Autumn is moving quickly now
Making way for winter’s return
I’m bracing for the cold to arrive
While trying to keep, each lesson I learn

Heidi Sands

10/12/19

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Chris Green October 14, 2019 at 7:29 AM Winter I am sure is quickly approaching in your area my friend. keep thinking positive things and maybe it won't feel so cold when it does arrive. :) Heidi Sands October 14, 2019 at 8:07 AM Yes, it is starting to get colder and raw outside. Yesterday was a bit warmer. Today may be, when the sun gets shining more. I hope I can keep thinking those positive thoughts to battle the bitter cold on the way. Thank you. Have a great day Chris :)

Arturo Michael October 13, 2019 at 7:48 AM The lesson you may keep but not the winter in your bones...Nice write my friend Heidi Sands October 13, 2019 at 8:01 AM Thank you so much Arturo. I appreciate you reading my poetry and all your support :)

Sandra Adams October 12, 2019 at 10:22 AM you set this scene up nicely...i followed through your footsteps, seeing what you were seeing...beautifully expressed Heidi :) hugs Heidi Sands October 12, 2019 at 10:51 AM I am happy to hear that Sandra. Thank you for your visit and kind comment. Have a nice day :)

Jeanne Mcgee October 12, 2019 at 9:40 AM I was right there with you walking those tracks....my thoughts adrift a morning breeze. Wonderful imagery. Heidi Sands October 12, 2019 at 10:09 AM Great to hear that Jeanne. Thank you for your kind comment. Have a nice day :)

Vijay Pandit October 12, 2019 at 8:40 AM Beautiful sights and sound of nature on this charming walk...uplifting! Heidi Sands October 12, 2019 at 8:41 AM Thank you very much Vijay. I love to hear that this is uplifting to read :)