Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Light Verse

- I Tried To Say -

On a cloud I wrote - I love you
                                       But the cloud blew away
                                    On a tree I wrote - I love you
                                  But someone cut down the tree
                          In the sand on the beach I wrote - I love you
                                 But the waves wiped them away
                                 In the wind, I cried - I love you
                      But the wind was too strong and no one could hear
                               In a small letter I wrote - I love you
                             But I never posted it - it was never sent
                                      But you know - I love you
                                    and my heart belongs to you




19.02.2013
A-L Andresen :)

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Molly Moore March 3, 2021 at 8:57 AM What a sweet sentiment, Anne-Lise. I loved the imagery of the cloud, the tree, the sand. Very nice. Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2021 at 11:14 AM - Molly, thanks for the nice visit and comment on my poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Franci Hoffman September 12, 2020 at 9:56 AM The love for another beautifully expressed, Sunshine Smile. Anne-Lise Andresen September 12, 2020 at 10:07 AM - Thank you very much, Franci :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu February 29, 2020 at 12:44 PM Hello Sunshine Smile, a very romantic poem. Enjoy your day my friend. hugs Darlene. Darlene De Beaulieu March 3, 2020 at 8:21 AM Your welcome my friend. Enjoy your day. Hugs Darlene Anne-Lise Andresen February 29, 2020 at 12:46 PM - Darlene, thanks for the nice visit and comment on my poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Frances Schiavina October 15, 2019 at 1:26 PM A truly brilliant poem on secrets of the heart. Anne-Lise Andresen October 15, 2019 at 1:56 PM - Thank you very much, Frances :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ibohal Kshetrimayum November 27, 2018 at 1:39 AM Wonderful lines. I wish I had written one like this forty five years ago. Thanks for sharing the poem. Anne-Lise Andresen October 15, 2019 at 1:55 PM - Thank you very much, Ibohal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Don Pettinelli October 20, 2017 at 4:56 PM Very nice Poem, I really liked it. Nice theme and awesomely written. Thank you. Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2017 at 4:50 AM - Thank you very much, Don :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tammy Cox October 18, 2017 at 8:24 AM I love this poem. Beautiful words. ?? Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2017 at 4:49 AM - Thank you very much, Tammy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dino Clarke October 14, 2017 at 10:11 PM I read it 5 times and still I want to read it again, it is great!! Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2017 at 4:49 AM - Thank you very much, Dino :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Karen Croft September 2, 2017 at 7:40 AM Love this poem. Anne-Lise Andresen September 2, 2017 at 7:51 AM - Karen, thanks for the nice visit and comment on my poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Thomas Hsi July 29, 2017 at 5:52 AM Beautiful. "I Tried To Say" I love you, BUT. Profound! Anne-Lise Andresen July 29, 2017 at 6:09 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Thomas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Matilda Divx June 19, 2017 at 6:00 AM Hey Wow!!!! Fantabulous burst of Love in comical way. Anne-Lise Andresen July 29, 2017 at 6:08 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Matilda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carole Duet December 9, 2016 at 7:54 PM I really like this poem, Sunny Girl. Lovely imagery. Anne-Lise Andresen December 10, 2016 at 7:23 AM :)

Carole Duet July 21, 2016 at 5:59 PM Hello Sunshine! I really like your poem, "I Tried to Say", which depicts such a human emotion. And, thank you for your welcoming comment on my poem also. Carole Anne-Lise Andresen July 22, 2016 at 7:44 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Carole :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Femi Adebayo May 12, 2016 at 10:22 AM Lovely write mate Anne-Lise Andresen May 12, 2016 at 11:42 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Opeyemi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rainbow Promise September 9, 2015 at 8:57 AM First of all, this is catchy as well as breath-taking. I could imagine doing every line. It also reminds me of life these days, it is like I'm writing "on a cloud, in the sand or on the wind". I "post" to Life, but others... Thank you for visiting my poetry site today. Rainbow. Anne-Lise Andresen September 9, 2015 at 11:07 AM - Rainbow, thanks for the nice visit and comment on my poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandy Tadros May 29, 2015 at 4:08 AM I love this! especially when you said "I never posted it- it was never sent" Anne-Lise Andresen May 29, 2015 at 4:17 AM - Everyone has a letter they did not send ..... I guess :))) - Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Sandy - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Shane Cooper January 29, 2015 at 7:58 PM Hi Anne Lise, I have to say that this is one of the most beautiful pieces of poetry I have seen on soup. The simplicity and elegance of the phrasing is breathtaking. "On a cloud I wrote - I love you But the cloud blew away". Hunting words. into favs and a 7 love Shane xxx Anne-Lise Andresen January 30, 2015 at 3:44 AM - How nice that you read my "older" poem - And what great comments, a 7 and fav! - Thank you my new friend Shane :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cindy Salter April 14, 2014 at 9:07 AM I love this ! Beautiful and reminds me of a couple I saw on the beach the other day writing I Love You in the sand. Anne-Lise Andresen April 14, 2014 at 12:01 PM ... so sweet couple :) - Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Cindy.- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Joey Foto November 30, 2013 at 9:20 AM Excellent. Soft, gentle, easy. We all can relate. Anne-Lise Andresen November 30, 2013 at 9:53 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Joey.- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan August 5, 2013 at 5:45 PM Well I'm looking for one of yours I haven' read " older ones" have a great day Anne- Lise ;} <3 Anne-Lise Andresen August 6, 2013 at 1:50 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Debbie.- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mafata Dunbar July 15, 2013 at 4:31 AM Awww beautiful, makes me believe in love again. Anne-Lise Andresen July 15, 2013 at 4:35 AM - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Mafata. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Terry-Ann Coley July 8, 2013 at 12:59 PM Powerful and beautiful words. Really lovely Anne-Lise Andresen July 8, 2013 at 1:01 PM - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Terry-Ann. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Danielle Deason April 16, 2013 at 12:23 PM I love that, I feel that way a lot, with what ever I say, no matter what I do people don't hear me, not unless I put it in a poem, them everyone seems to want to help Anne-Lise Andresen April 16, 2013 at 12:27 PM - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Danielle. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan April 2, 2013 at 2:02 AM Oh, this is awesome Anne ;} going to fav's xo's to you ;} Anne-Lise Andresen April 2, 2013 at 2:59 AM - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Debbie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Smith March 26, 2013 at 9:48 AM Beautiful sweet poetry here, WHO needs a big gesture to tell them What they know is true. Keep writing Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2013 at 10:57 AM - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Joanna. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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