I Tried To Please You

I tried to please you, but you was never at ease.

I to tried please you, but your mind was not free.

I tried to please you, but you could not feel my warm love breeze.

I tried to please you, but you never loved me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Allison Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 4:54 PM
Sometimes you have to admit defeat and move on - hard when the feelings are not reciprocated:-( Hugs jan xx
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