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I Tried To Leave

Surrounded and distracted to a fault the mayhem of your love strenuates me I abrogate my feelings towards you not to wound you only wherefore I may breathe. Petulant indignation on your brow is lovelier than that tiresome doting kiss And now I venture towards things unallowed; previous to this day I, you would miss, so dreadfully it seemed a very sin that I should with my friends enjoy a night. You doubtless lay awake and cry within- this image from my mind I cannot fight I drink until I blackout at your door requiring the verve of your love's ardor.

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Skat A

Date: 6/16/2016 8:09:00 PM

Awesome second read Evelyn..skat

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2014 2:14:00 PM

Evelyn , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Paul Callus

Date: 3/2/2014 7:07:00 AM

Strikingly emotional. // cu around//paul

Tiaua M Ioane

Date: 3/1/2014 7:24:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this, style is subtle with a depth delivered by an artistic use of words. Thanks for sharing. Tiaua

Skat A

Date: 3/1/2014 5:57:00 PM

Evelyn, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/1/2014 4:55:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Evelyn - I choose your first well written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Johnny Rhinem

Date: 3/1/2014 3:30:00 PM

Man, How I Dig Perfectly Placed, Passion! Once It's Inside Girl What Are You Going To Do, Except, Black Out Amid The Ever Flowing Tides Of, Love ~ Welcome To Her Loving's PoetrySoup And Keep Brushing: Beautiful Painting ~ Love John