I Tried To Hide

I tried to hide
I tried to hide 
But I just can't hide me

I tried to hide 
Yet my soul speaks 
To me

I tried to hide 
But all I see tells
A tale 

I tried to hide 
Now can't hide from my self

I tried to hide
Yet nature keep me on
To my dream

I tried to hide 
Yet my mind can't 
Let me be

I tried to hide 
But I can't hide 
The truth 

I tried to hide
Yet I can not hide

Now no wonder always 
I tried to hide

For the more
I tried to hide 

The hidden 
Keep me on 
So the unknown
Reveal a revelation 
whenever
I tried to hide

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/9/2015 8:14:00 AM
Stop hiding and write more great poems! This is a solid gem, it is! I once hid to avoid the mess I made in my life. Then later I found out facing and solving the mess was what living is truly all about. We imperfect creatures can not help but to mess up. A7 and adding this great poem to my fav list! Thanks..
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Date: 1/16/2015 1:00:00 PM
Good write, Richard. Bless you eve
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Richard Nnoli
Date: 2/1/2015 10:39:00 AM
OH MAY UR LIFE BE SO SO, MORE AND MORE FRUITFUL EVE, THANKS ALOT FOR UR WORDS OF BLESSING RICHARD
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