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I Tried

I tried to say the words that leapt from my soul I tried to send the messages Scrolled with every breeze I tried to express feelings New and unknown to me Never certain you could hear Leaping, blowing, falling In the air I breathe When truth left my lips Heidi Sands 5/31/18

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John Gondolf
Date: 6/2/2018 12:43:00 PM
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Nicely written, Heidi, sometimes it is hardest t communicate with the ones we are closest to. John
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/2/2018 12:56:00 PM
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Thank you John. :)
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Joseph May
Date: 6/1/2018 3:12:00 PM
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Nicely penned Heidi..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/1/2018 3:13:00 PM
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Thank you Joseph :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/31/2018 8:14:00 PM
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Hello Heidi, yes you did try.Sometimes it is hard to speak what is on your mind. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/31/2018 9:06:00 PM
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Thank you Darlene. Goodnight :)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 5/31/2018 3:30:00 PM
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When one speaks the truth from the heart, it really doesn't matter what words they use. The eyes say what the tongue can't. Nicely penned, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/31/2018 3:43:00 PM
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That is true DT, if the person is with you to be seen. Thank you for your comment :)
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/31/2018 2:40:00 PM
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Outstanding poem dearest, Heidi! Just loved it!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/31/2018 2:41:00 PM
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Thank you so much Demetrios. :) I am happy to hear you loved it!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/31/2018 1:52:00 PM
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This is so so beautiful..excellent poem Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/31/2018 2:28:00 PM
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Thank you Vijay. I appreciate your comment. I hope you are having a nice day :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/31/2018 12:38:00 PM
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Very well done Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/31/2018 12:42:00 PM
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Thank you Tim :)

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