Heidi Sands Poet Free verse

I Tried

I tried to say the words
that leapt from my soul
I tried to send the messages
Scrolled with every breeze
I tried to express feelings
New and unknown to me
Never certain you could hear
Leaping, blowing, falling
In the air I breathe
When truth left my lips

Heidi Sands

5/31/18

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John Gondolf June 2, 2018 at 12:43 PM Nicely written, Heidi, sometimes it is hardest t communicate with the ones we are closest to. John Heidi Sands June 2, 2018 at 12:56 PM Thank you John. :)

Joseph May June 1, 2018 at 3:12 PM Nicely penned Heidi.. Heidi Sands June 1, 2018 at 3:13 PM Thank you Joseph :)

Darlene De Beaulieu May 31, 2018 at 8:14 PM Hello Heidi, yes you did try.Sometimes it is hard to speak what is on your mind. Have a nice evening my friend. Heidi Sands May 31, 2018 at 9:06 PM Thank you Darlene. Goodnight :)

Daniel Turner May 31, 2018 at 3:30 PM When one speaks the truth from the heart, it really doesn't matter what words they use. The eyes say what the tongue can't. Nicely penned, Heidi. Heidi Sands May 31, 2018 at 3:43 PM That is true DT, if the person is with you to be seen. Thank you for your comment :)

Demetrios Trifiatis May 31, 2018 at 2:40 PM Outstanding poem dearest, Heidi! Just loved it! Heidi Sands May 31, 2018 at 2:41 PM Thank you so much Demetrios. :) I am happy to hear you loved it!

Vijay Pandit May 31, 2018 at 1:52 PM This is so so beautiful..excellent poem Heidi. Heidi Sands May 31, 2018 at 2:28 PM Thank you Vijay. I appreciate your comment. I hope you are having a nice day :)

Tim Smith May 31, 2018 at 12:38 PM Very well done Heidi Heidi Sands May 31, 2018 at 12:42 PM Thank you Tim :)