I Touched a Delicate Rose

I spy a rose I suppose 
Just a little new born tender 
Bud of a rose of a rose of a rose 
Bud I  I  I  I  myself spy a rose  
I touched
Its sepals and its Petals so soft and alive
Delicate, a rose 
Its stem and its thorns
I  I  I  I  am privileged 
I touched a rose

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/12/2023 4:32:00 PM

Hello Val, The rose is soft to touch. The scent is heavenly. my fV. flower. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/13/2023 8:24:00 AM

Hello Val, you are welcome. peace my friend. Enjoy your day.

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther
Date: 2/12/2023 5:55:00 PM

Hello Darlene. Thanks for your comment, your input is appreciated. Peace my friend. VB Rogers blk panther