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I Took It

I never realized how much it meant to you how much you favored it. I thought I loved her but I was young so young and I didn’t know better. It was easy to take it once I saw how beautiful the bracelet was all those charms. So I took it when I saw it mingling with other not so pretty things. I took it and marched over to her house and I put it on her wrist. I didn’t get the response I was hoping for but now she has it for good. Forgive me it was a precious memory to you and I took it and gave it away forever. (click on the pic to preview my poetry book!)

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Date: 1/16/2021 6:25:00 AM
very thought provoking write Rob. It has my mind twisting in several directions concerning the theft of the bracelet and the belief the memory was also stolen. Nicely done.
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Rob Levasseur
Date: 1/16/2021 7:23:00 AM
Hello John, thank you for your comments on my poem.

Book: Shattered Sighs