I Told You So

They told me so 
But I could'nt face the truth 
Because I believed in you 
Dust is dust 
Ashes are lying on the floor 
I started to hurt every second more 
I feel betrayed 
All the stuff I told you 
Means No more 
I speak 
While your face drops to the cold floor 
A voice in my head says 
I told you so 
I told you so 
I told you so 
I told you so 
I told you so it said softly 
It hurts when you 
Lose a very close friend or buddie 
Over nothing 
I fell to the ground for a moment 
But now all the pain is gone 
There just a memory now 
Even though I cared about you 
Had the most respect for you 
It's time for you to go 
So be Gone!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 16, 2016 at 4:29 PM
audrey castaneda, Nice to read your poem today. enjoyed ~LINDA~
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November 20, 2013 at 5:21 PM
Great poem, Audrey. Beautifully expressed about the moment of letting someone go, whose not longer a positive in your life. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of mine. Peace.
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September 23, 2011 at 7:20 PM
Happy weekend I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Audrey. Love, Carol
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