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I Told You So

They told me so But I could'nt face the truth Because I believed in you Dust is dust Ashes are lying on the floor I started to hurt every second more I feel betrayed All the stuff I told you Means No more I speak While your face drops to the cold floor A voice in my head says I told you so I told you so I told you so I told you so I told you so it said softly It hurts when you Lose a very close friend or buddie Over nothing I fell to the ground for a moment But now all the pain is gone There just a memory now Even though I cared about you Had the most respect for you It's time for you to go So be Gone!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/16/2016 4:29:00 PM
audrey castaneda, Nice to read your poem today. enjoyed ~LINDA~
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Date: 11/20/2013 5:21:00 PM
Great poem, Audrey. Beautifully expressed about the moment of letting someone go, whose not longer a positive in your life. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of mine. Peace.
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Date: 9/23/2011 7:20:00 PM
Happy weekend I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Audrey. Love, Carol
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