Lucilla Carrillo Poet Free verse

I Thought You Loved Me

I Thought You Loved Me

I thought you Loved me. 
How could I know that 
you were only putting on 
a show. With kisses and 
sweet words, you took me 
to heaven and than you let 
me fall.

A good Actor'" you turned out 
to be, the best that in my life,
I would ever see. How ironic can
life be? The one that I loved the 
most, betrayed me.

I thought you loved me. Now my 
life is almost ending and I still think
of you. Tell me - have you changed,
or are you still one and the same... 

08/07/2014
Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

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Mohammad Yamin December 6, 2014 at 3:01 PM Dear Lucilla, An enchanting poem -very touching -very well worded. I admire your writing skill.Thanks for visiting my poem Why Am I and appreciating my thoughts. Your admiration is a source of encouragement for me. Most of us are so engaged in the meaningless activities of life that we have no time to ponder over the purpose of life itself. My vision says, the purpose is to love. Nothing else. -Mohammad

Bl Devnath September 1, 2014 at 9:18 AM Some people's life is like this. They are the false actors in real life, I think. One thing is clear from your poem is that somethings are there in life which can't be forgot and cause inner damage in whole life and amounts to tragedy. Very sad poem nicely worded. Loved always, my beautiful lovely friend, bl Lucilla Carrillo September 1, 2014 at 12:08 PM Thank you Bi and life goes on.

Justin Bordner August 14, 2014 at 1:06 AM This poem of dignified heartache reminds that at the end of the day we can only own the love in our hearts, and the love that we give to others, that we can't control the way others choose to show their love for us. This poem is significant. J.A.B. Lucilla Carrillo September 1, 2014 at 12:13 PM Thank you for reading. This things happen.

Ravi Sathasivam August 11, 2014 at 3:15 AM Such a sad write of betrayal. Well penned. Tfs

Vera Duggan August 10, 2014 at 11:00 PM Lucilla my dear I am learning your life story through these wonderful poems that you write, sometimes I wonder why we put ourselves through all this hurt and pain when we get into relationships, but that is life, Take care my dear friend........Vera...........

Faye Gibson August 10, 2014 at 3:40 PM Yes, Lucilla, some betrayals stay with us for many years. We think about them and feel old emotions. Very thoughtful poem. Lucilla Carrillo August 10, 2014 at 10:43 PM Yes you are right. It hurts, but time heals the wounds.

Harry Horsman August 10, 2014 at 7:09 AM trust is invaluable Lucilla, so many feel the backlash of betrayal, your poetry is so sincere, and also extremely inspiring...

Anne-Lise Andresen August 9, 2014 at 1:59 PM - Dear Lucilla, a beautiful but so sad poem ..... how forgetting one, which just remember you sometimes ? - Have a nice weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Lucilla Carrillo August 9, 2014 at 2:02 PM Thank you so much Anne Lise. You too have a great week end.

Arthur Vaso August 8, 2014 at 8:06 PM This is such a lovely poem, you have expressed the hurt we have all felt at some point in our lives! Lucilla Carrillo August 9, 2014 at 1:14 PM Thank you Arthur; Some people learn from the first time. Others never do. I did.

Tim Smith August 7, 2014 at 3:24 PM I am so sorry sweetie....I will give you all the love and hugs you need :) Tim Lucilla Carrillo August 7, 2014 at 3:35 PM Thank you Tim. You are sweet.

Jan Allison August 7, 2014 at 3:17 PM Oh such a sad write Lucilla I think many of us can relate to being betrayed at some stage of our lives - i can definitely relate to parts of this:-( Hugs jan xxx Lucilla Carrillo August 7, 2014 at 3:33 PM Thank Jan; Sometimes this a scar in our lives that never heals.