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I Thought He Cared

I thought he cared I really did But now I’m alone With myself I cannot bear My hearts still beating As my mind goes cold Why do I love a man? Who my hands can never hold With my voice I can call him my own Is just a wish That won’t ever come true Deep down that thought I’ve always known

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Charlene Wilcox

Date: 9/26/2014 10:26:00 PM

Is that a typo error is just a wish or should it go like this? For it is just a wish???Something right in that area did not flow right for Me but the rest is Awesome

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 9/16/2014 2:54:00 AM

"My hearts still beating" that's all. We suffer depredations and trepidations at any point of time of our life, honestly speaking. We lose the faculty of reason and become victims to indecisiveness. I admit this weakness. I also feel this can be flouted. Have peace of mind and enjoy the day. We are all with you. I have read all your poems. They are fresh and need no editing. Who can edit a pure heart? Love to you Kaitlyn.

Eve Roper
Date: 9/22/2014 3:48:00 PM

I too agree with Rajat, “My hearts still beating" and that is what matters. Feelings are an emotion that in itself is hard to understand. I really did enjoy the read. love eve