I Thought

Simple promises that I have made...I really did mean it, yet they were never sustained.
Never think more of myself than I am, somehow my unconscious vanity has betrayed me once again?
Never put someone down unless it serves some greater good, somehow my mouth never got the memo?
Never take more out of this life than you need to sustain you in your daily life, somehow my greed has over taking my virtue and I find myself buying stuff I don't really need?
Never miss a day to thank God for all that he has given me...yet I sometimes put food in my mouth and never give it God's blessings.
Never mind...my good intentions or my moral convictions, damn my heart means well but somehow I lack in my commitment. I thought a desire to do what you say was all I would need to have...but the truth be told, everything you want in this life requires much time and dedication.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/12/2012 3:52:00 AM
True words,words of wisdom.You explained your self wonderfully here!!! Superb write!!!
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Date: 6/11/2012 7:52:00 PM
PURE GREATNESS! I'm working on myself in these ways. "much time and dedication" is what I need to understand. My impatience get the best of me. In my fav's <3
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