Andrea Dietrich Poet Triolet

I Think of You

I think of you when fall is in the air,

remembering that warm September night

I reveled in your long and tender stare.

Those kisses!  Why can’t anything compare

to then? Now even stars seem not as bright!

I think of you when Fall is in the air -

remembering that warm September night.


For the "I Think Of You" Poetry Contest of gautami phookan

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Phyllis Babcock April 21, 2015 at 6:55 PM A beautiful romantic write and done for the evening. Been busy doing the downstairs basement. Painted it yesterday now the ceiling tile and then the carpet. I hope this is the end of renos for a long time. love phyl

Njeri Hunjeri March 9, 2015 at 7:05 AM Congrats Andrea, hugs njeri

Barbara Gorelick February 22, 2015 at 7:29 PM Oh those nights..takes me back...congrats my dear. BG

Jan Allison February 22, 2015 at 6:55 PM dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) Hugs jan xx

Poet Destroyer A February 22, 2015 at 6:03 PM Andrea, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Skat A February 22, 2015 at 2:53 PM Andrea, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win, enjoy the coming week **SKAT**

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 22, 2015 at 5:34 AM Congratulations Andrea. Love

Judy Konos February 21, 2015 at 8:22 AM This is lovely but I wanted to say I missed the great Chuckle..Andrea come out of the closet...so today I have a great chuckle...LOL...You are the Star!

Eve Roper February 20, 2015 at 2:40 PM Well written, love is in the air. 7 Blessings eve

Wilma Neels February 17, 2015 at 6:18 AM A beauty Andrea, wishing you the best for Gautami's contest as well. Love the form you used. About my book I think I did a blog on here that time. It is called 'whispers from my soul" and yes I went the self publishing route :)

Tim Smith February 16, 2015 at 2:17 PM Memories can take on a life of there own and can become even larger the event itself....love this form...hugs Tim

Daver Austin February 16, 2015 at 9:44 AM Good thoughts of fall when winter comes around, eh. Very warm and tender piece, Andrea. Love, daver

Richard Lamoureux February 16, 2015 at 9:06 AM Lovely piece filled with longing!

Monterey Sirak February 16, 2015 at 8:06 AM Your words fill the air with a warm melancholy sense of nostalgia. Awesome!

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri February 16, 2015 at 7:17 AM A nostalgic charming poem written in awesome reminiscent romance wow! Nice to read u again!

Shane Cooper February 15, 2015 at 10:12 PM Oft times a word or smell or my surrounds will trigger memories of a moment of love and joy from my past. They seem still so bright yet again they will shortly fade as the memory drifts on. Your poem is lovely Andrea. Thank you. And good luck in the competition my friend. Love Shane xxx

Laura Leiser February 15, 2015 at 9:26 PM A very romantic and sweet poem, Andrea. Best of luck in the contest! :)

Robert Johnson February 15, 2015 at 9:21 PM Your memory of September in the middle of winter is beyond me. Must have been the kiss. :) Hope you had a warm lovely Valentines. Peace. :)

Frederic Parker February 15, 2015 at 9:20 PM Simple yet effective...must of been one heck of a night...good luck my friend in the contest

Sandra Haight February 15, 2015 at 7:26 PM So romantic and such beautifully written Triolet, Andrea. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Barbara Gorelick February 15, 2015 at 6:59 PM Yes, I remember those sweet nights..lovely and it will surely do well..BG

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 15, 2015 at 6:02 PM This has such a nostalgic feeling of romance, Andrea , and I just LOVE your triolets. Sometimes I hit and sometimes I miss with this form. I have yet to get inspired by this one, and I think I'm running out of time...maybe later. Hugs, Rhonda

Scott Thirtyseven February 15, 2015 at 5:57 PM Wonderful words. You have captured a warm sense of fond longing. A pleasure to read. Best of luck in the contest. Shame you were not able to come up with something for my Ants comp. I would still be interested in what you would be able to come up on the theme, if inspiration ever hits.

Paul Callus February 15, 2015 at 3:53 PM hmmm my type of triolet...one of my favourite forms! many times our mind goes back to such memories ... wonder what it is that triggers such flashbacks! // paul Andrea Dietrich February 15, 2015 at 5:40 PM the monotony and sadness of losing our dreams and getting old?

John Fleming February 15, 2015 at 3:49 PM Rather nice this, Andrea! :)

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