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I Think I Write So Avidly

I think I write so avidly, Aggressively cutting the paper with words, Because I hope to create a spark With my force of passion And I dream that it will become bright enough That my own poems will form the lantern That submits my darkness to light.

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Date: 1/17/2025 5:39:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/14/2025 3:24:00 PM
Ahhh!! We never know when one we write will touch a person who really needs that poem in their lives at that moment in time or in the future. Sara K
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Sarah Davies
Date: 1/15/2025 4:06:00 AM
Hi Sara, I am so glad you like my poetry! Thank you for your words, from one 'Sarah' to another.
Date: 1/14/2025 2:32:00 PM
Hi sarah, you certainly have created a spark by posting your first poem on Poetry Soup. I hope to see some more your wonderful thoughts soon:-) hugs Jan
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Sarah Davies
Date: 1/15/2025 4:07:00 AM
Hi Jan, Thank you! I am so excited to join such a heartwarming community of people with a passion for writing! Sarah D

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