I Think I Should Clean My Room

I think I should clean my room...
I'm not sure where to put my past
The heap heaves from the shelf
And falls with a crash

A broken pencil breaks my skin
A dark red raindrop falls to meet 
It's spiritual kin on the floor

The shadows flicker in the corners 
I turn round my shoulder in fear
Even with the lights on

I've lifted the old layers and
The bold ancients scurry free
At first off guard but see me now

They understand who I was,
My layers of mess peeled like a snake
They know I've changed
Under the safe they keep me the same

I meditate to the moon
I leave the mess in the gloom
I watch them eat my skin
I clean from within the mess
My room is falling away
I rise and it's new
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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August 31, 2015 at 3:18 AM
- A great poem, Henry ! - With smiles and joy I welcome you to P-Soup :) - Hope you will find this poem page interesting and post many more poems in the future - Have a great experience together here with us in "the poems world" - I wish you every success - // Anne-Lise :)
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August 30, 2015 at 3:09 PM
Hi Henry, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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August 30, 2015 at 12:25 PM
Henry, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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