I Think

I think, therefore I can’t be anything that I want to only hope is to scar this place with my tainted, painted over self belief where life doesn’t chance upon my gaze where obesity is security and purity is within, I think

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Moonbee Canady

Date: 9/19/2009 1:29:00 PM

Excellent and the Poem is a Circle. You begin and end with 'I think' Love that. Also I see you delve into the human pschye. I was told a while ago. Don't say No to yourself, there are plenty of other people to do that for you (smile) I live by that and your poem touched on that - gets one to think. Also, we have to continue to upkeep of our faith and root the negative out of our brain before we can achieve anything. Great Write Gareth Looking for more great writes from you... MoonBee