I, Thee Love

Note: This poem is also in the point of view of a character dedicated to another character in a writing my friend Laura and I are doing
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While walking through the dark I saw a light
It was small a distant but lovely and bright
As I made my way through obstacles and sludge
It seemed to take forever and I feared the light would leave-but it never budged
For all my time alive I was never quite so surprised
As when I reached the end and the light was you
Everything now is for you, everything I do
To make you happy and make you smile
For you make my life worth while
I thought I'd be lost in darkness forever
But alas you came and showed me something better
I love you
I do
I love you with all my heart
I love you so, I don't know where to start
You saved me from grave uncertainty
Gave me meaning, belief and certainty
My dear beloved for you I lay down my life
And ask you fondly to become my wife
To spend the rest of time with you
Is all I want to do
Sweetly dreaming peacefully of you in slumber
I can only merely say things from my heart
I cannot bring you gifts of light
Like you did me
But I can give you
My life
My love
My heart
Forever and always yours
I thee, cherish...
and love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 8/9/2013 9:21:00 PM
Beautiful poetry eeee Always, Laura
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Date: 4/17/2013 10:34:00 PM
Is this for Laura, from the soup... your poem and dedication is lovely... xox~ Linda
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